Salted Memories

Salted memories of childhood.
Bitter taste of tears.
Father teaching me to swim.
Overcoming my fears.

Searching for cockles at the beach.
Little bubbles in the sand.
Scrape with the garden rake.
Then dig in with your hand.

Periwinkle soup on Friday night.
With their curly little tail.
Flip the lid off with a needle,
to expose the little snail.

Oysters were a special treat.
I loved their slithery slide.
Salted memories in my mouth.
It made me want to dive.

Crab claws from the fishermen,
hawling their baskets in.
Daddy would do a deal with them,
as we were in for a swim.

Salted memories from years ago.
Bitter taste of tears.
I miss my home and always will.
Forever down the years.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/25/2018 8:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Jean, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/26/2018 1:16:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 4/25/2018 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is so beautifully written. Cherished memories.
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/25/2018 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Susan. I have always loved being near the sea.
Date: 4/25/2018 10:05:00 AM
A fun poem with great rhythm, Jean. Congrats on your well deserved bronze medal win.
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Date: 4/25/2018 10:26:00 AM
Thank you for the placement Line.
Date: 5/31/2016 10:56:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Congratulation my lovely friend for your beautiful win. Loved always, bl
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/31/2016 1:14:00 PM
Thank you BL. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 5/28/2016 3:17:00 PM
Jean... Congratulations...Luv.Linda
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/28/2016 3:49:00 PM
Linda. Thank you. I am thrilled.
Date: 2/15/2016 3:24:00 PM
Well penned Jean. I can hear the echoes from the womb of the conch shell; and know that wherever I am, home will dwell. Thanks for sharing the write. God bless. Peace and Love. Write on!
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/15/2016 3:30:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Millard. I have a long way to go, but I enjoy writing very much.
Date: 2/15/2016 11:34:00 AM
Beagle, his name is Buddy and he's an epileptic. It's just me and him living the laid back life of bachelors.
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/15/2016 11:36:00 AM
Well, as far as I'm concerned ,he's a COCKER SPANIEL!!
Date: 2/15/2016 11:18:00 AM
You asked me what HVD stood for, remember? I will read your limerick, I could use a good laugh.
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/15/2016 11:31:00 AM
I remember now. What bred of dog is that? It looks the image of my brother's.
Date: 2/15/2016 6:43:00 AM
Happy Valentine"s Day
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/15/2016 11:16:00 AM
Daniel, before I went into work this morning I had hurried off a Limerick to give you a laugh, called VALENTINE, dedicated to you. Did you see it? Not my best, so I took it down.I will try and come up with something better this evening. You DO know it was yesterday???
Date: 2/14/2016 7:42:00 PM
Jean dear, there are no bad memories only bad experiences. Love the story. HVD:)
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Date: 2/15/2016 1:16:00 AM
Funny you should sat that Daniel. I was thinking after writing this,"We do not remember days, we remember moments." I had sent the poem on to some of my siblings, well aware that our childhood was far from the idyllic picrture I sometimes paint of it. What does HVD mean?
Date: 2/14/2016 1:44:00 PM
You are very good with "nostalgia", Jean. Adds a powerful "flavour" to any poem. You have certainly brightened up my grey day - Thank you! My very best regards! :) john
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Date: 2/14/2016 1:47:00 PM
Aw...John.....cheer up!! It's Valentine's Day for God's sake! If I am stuck at home alone, and happy writing poems, then at least it's good to know I have spread a little fun. Jean.
Date: 2/14/2016 1:32:00 PM
Beautifully written! So bittersweet and splendid presentation with superb rhyming, cadence and content. BRAVO Jean! Best wishes, Keith
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/14/2016 1:50:00 PM
I see, I always like to go with the flow.
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Date: 2/14/2016 1:37:00 PM
It's just another word for 'flow!'
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/14/2016 1:35:00 PM
KEITH!! you will give me a big head! I don't even know what "cadence" means. Has it something to do with music? Thank you so much. Jean
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