Salted Memories

Salted memories of childhood.
Bitter taste of tears.
Father teaching me to swim.
Overcoming my fears.

Searching for cockles at the beach.
Little bubbles in the sand.
Scrape with the garden rake.
Then dig in with your hand.

Periwinkle soup on Friday night.
With their curly little tail.
Flip the lid off with a needle,
to expose the little snail.

Oysters were a special treat.
I loved their slithery slide.
Salted memories in my mouth.
It made me want to dive.

Crab claws from the fishermen,
hawling their baskets in.
Daddy would do a deal with them,
as we were in for a swim.

Salted memories from years ago.
Bitter taste of tears.
I miss my home and always will.
Forever down the years.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Congratulations on your win,Jean, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
Murray Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 1:16 AM
Thank you Eve.
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is so beautifully written. Cherished memories.
Murray Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Thank you Susan. I have always loved being near the sea.
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:05 AM
A fun poem with great rhythm, Jean. Congrats on your well deserved bronze medal win.
Murray Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:26 AM
Thank you for the placement Line.
Devnath  Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Beautiful poem. Congratulation my lovely friend for your beautiful win. Loved always, bl
Murray Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Thank you BL. I am glad you liked it.
A   Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Jean... Congratulations...Luv.Linda
Murray Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Linda. Thank you. I am thrilled.
Lowe Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Well penned Jean. I can hear the echoes from the womb of the conch shell; and know that wherever I am, home will dwell. Thanks for sharing the write. God bless. Peace and Love. Write on!
Murray Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Thank you for stopping by Millard. I have a long way to go, but I enjoy writing very much.
Turner Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Beagle, his name is Buddy and he's an epileptic. It's just me and him living the laid back life of bachelors.
Murray Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Well, as far as I'm concerned ,he's a COCKER SPANIEL!!
Turner Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 11:18 AM
You asked me what HVD stood for, remember? I will read your limerick, I could use a good laugh.
Murray Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 11:31 AM
I remember now. What bred of dog is that? It looks the image of my brother's.
Turner Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Happy Valentine"s Day
Murray Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Daniel, before I went into work this morning I had hurried off a Limerick to give you a laugh, called VALENTINE, dedicated to you. Did you see it? Not my best, so I took it down.I will try and come up with something better this evening. You DO know it was yesterday???
Turner Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Jean dear, there are no bad memories only bad experiences. Love the story. HVD:)
Murray Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 1:16 AM
Funny you should sat that Daniel. I was thinking after writing this,"We do not remember days, we remember moments." I had sent the poem on to some of my siblings, well aware that our childhood was far from the idyllic picrture I sometimes paint of it. What does HVD mean?
Fleming Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 1:44 PM
You are very good with "nostalgia", Jean. Adds a powerful "flavour" to any poem. You have certainly brightened up my grey day - Thank you! My very best regards! :) john
Murray Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Aw...John.....cheer up!! It's Valentine's Day for God's sake! If I am stuck at home alone, and happy writing poems, then at least it's good to know I have spread a little fun. Jean.
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February 14, 2016 at 1:32 PM
Beautifully written! So bittersweet and splendid presentation with superb rhyming, cadence and content. BRAVO Jean! Best wishes, Keith
Murray Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 1:50 PM
I see, I always like to go with the flow.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 1:37 PM
It's just another word for 'flow!'
Murray Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 1:35 PM
KEITH!! you will give me a big head! I don't even know what "cadence" means. Has it something to do with music? Thank you so much. Jean
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