Notes About The Poem

This is an extention of a real experience, along the Gulf Coast of Texas, exploring a beach on Padre Island, south of Corpus Christi, putting my ear on the crest of the berm, I could hear and see grains of sand whoosh up by the landward drafts of wind, past my eye over the berm and land on the leeward side of the dune, to click and slip 2 or 3 millimeters down the slip face of the bay side of the berm. This happened a million times that afternoon. Imagine the accumulation over a million afternoons. 

Saltating Grains

Each impact is a click that echoes briefly,
then is lost into the rush and roar of close encounters.

Each grain moved by flowing fluid into turbulent shear,
jostled by unseen, unexpected bursts of confined chaos.

Lifting, pushing, pulling, releasing, falling, touching,
and settling into beds of like size to rest,...

while the echoes drift away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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May 28, 2019 at 10:16 PM
Victor, I am again enraptured and captivated by the creative and artistic brilliance of your poem. Gorgeous poetry, but especially your last line for a beautiful finale, oh! and this line too; 'Imagine the accumulation over a million afternoons.' - gloriously thought-provoking and awe-inspiring. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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