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Saltating Grains

Each impact is a click that echoes briefly, then is lost into the rush and roar of close encounters. Each grain moved by flowing fluid into turbulent shear, jostled by unseen, unexpected bursts of confined chaos. Lifting, pushing, pulling, releasing, falling, touching, and settling into beds of like size to rest,... while the echoes drift away.

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Date: 5/28/2019 10:16:00 PM
Victor, I am again enraptured and captivated by the creative and artistic brilliance of your poem. Gorgeous poetry, but especially your last line for a beautiful finale, oh! and this line too; 'Imagine the accumulation over a million afternoons.' - gloriously thought-provoking and awe-inspiring. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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