Salt Water

A thing so paradoxical, sin
So all encompassing it’s grasp
A curse of eternal thirst
though we are drowning.
Our hands desperately scratching for a life raft
Secretly made of the same water we drown in,
Our hearts repulsed by the light
So we continue our daily floundering
Chasing a trail of crumbs we call “Hope”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 9:40 AM
Great work expressing the word Hope..If we just have a small bit of Hope we perish not..Sara
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