Salt tears

The wind picks up across Small Bay,
it whips the sand against my face.
The kitesurfers in bright array
are carving lines through salty space.
A crowd of families line the shore,
their children's shouts like distant bells,
while Table Mountain, ancient core,
stands watch above the crashing swells.

I watch the bathers, brave and bold,
who dive into the icy deep.
I join them in the biting cold,
but feel my spirit's heavy sleep.
I plunge beneath the frothy white,
just going through the motions there.
A ghost beneath the surface light,
with salt crust tangled in my eyes and hair.

I slowly walk across the cooling sand,
the Western sky a fiery bloom;
To join the others on the strand,
and dispel this encroaching gloom.
But as I reach to touch a hand,
my fingers pass through vacancy;
The bay is still, the water's grand,
and I am all that's left of me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Jones Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 11:55 AM
Flawless rhyme!! Enjoyed reading. If for contest best wishes!
Elias Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 1:32 AM
Hi Karen I appreciate your words of encouragement. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Terry Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 11:27 AM
I could hear the waves crashing and taste the salt water in my mind. Excellent poem!
Elias Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 1:29 AM
Hi Angela Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
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