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Salt Lickings

To the theater went bold Mary Brown for her sweetness she's surely renown then she salted her corn when her date wanted **** Now he lies in the aisle quite facedown.

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Painted Hunter

Date: 12/3/2013 12:08:00 PM

Ha...oh my gosh....that's a funny one..;)

Jeanette Woods

Date: 11/7/2013 2:31:00 PM

I love limericks! And they are a LOT harder to write than people think! I needed this laugh today too, so thanks so much, kudos!

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2013 12:00:00 PM

Debbie*nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2013 7:28:00 PM

Debbie, , Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/6/2013 11:40:00 AM

rated X for xtraordinary, debbie..happy cheers to you for your win!..:) huggs

Donna Jones

Date: 11/6/2013 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations Debbie..enjoyed again...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2013 9:01:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Joseph May

Date: 11/5/2013 12:15:00 PM

congrats on your win Debbie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2013 8:09:00 AM

Debs, yours is another one , as I look at it, I wish I'd scored it higher. Love the double meaning of ""lickings' That made it a good limerick for me! Congrats on your win.

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 11/2/2013 10:47:00 AM

excellent humor Debbie.Bold brown finished her date.Debbie there are people who kill people by salt poisoning.bloody bold brown poisoned her dirty pron loving date.There was once a case when the mother salt poisoned her son and later she was served life imprisonment.Debbie these salt poisoning crimes are quite prevalent now. (: ) Jenish