Reason A. Poteet Poet Rhyme

Salt Crystals

"Writin' with no rhyme is like
peanut butter without jelly."
Livin' life with your shoes on
means your feet get damp and smelly.

Workin' without A/C and
you got a melted choc'lit bar.
Puttin' her in the freezer,
somehow don't get her back to par.

Underneath our back porch lies
the laziest dog on God's green earth.
Nothin' like a dog that hides
unless she's givin' birth.

Reason A. Poteet
The first two lines are from my own experience.  The rest  
is based on the character, Jase Robertson from Duck Dynasty

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Sara Kendrick March 17, 2014 at 11:26 AM Way to go !!! Yeah!! Sara

Monterey Sirak March 16, 2014 at 5:51 AM Fantastic, wise and whimsical. Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2014 at 7:20 AM - Congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. last contest, Reason. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta March 15, 2014 at 2:29 AM Congrats on the fine win in the contest Impress me IV, reason

Skat A March 14, 2014 at 6:50 PM Nice seeing you in Giorgio's winning list... SKAT Reason A. Poteet March 14, 2014 at 9:28 PM Not sure why that appeared the way it did on his blog but I'll take it as a good thing.

Verlena S. Walker March 14, 2014 at 6:45 PM Well done Reason... Enjoyed the visit and congratulations on your 1st place win.... Verlena Reason A. Poteet March 14, 2014 at 8:52 PM Thank you, Verlena, appreciate the read and remark.

Robert Pettit March 13, 2014 at 2:47 PM This one puts a clear, entertaining picture into the reader's mind. This was a very enjoyable, entertaining read. Reason A. Poteet March 13, 2014 at 3:07 PM Thanks, Robert, written in honor of Duck Dynasty, whose vernacular is much the same as mine. I'm older.