Alexis Y. Poet Limerick

Sally Sue

There was once a gal named Sally Sue
    who liked to swim wearing just two red shoes
             folk thought it was strange 
               she said it’s free-range
      Her red shoes vanished, she’s  sad and blue
























Alexis Y.
7-31-2020

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Gershon Wolf August 3, 2020 at 4:00 PM Hey, this is really cute, Alexis!... Here's a chuckle for you: The first time I read the second line, I thought to myself -- 'JUST' two read shoes?! -- As if Sally Sue should have been wearing three or four shoes, or something... lol... Then, duh-me!, I got it! Super limerick! Thanks, Gershon

Silent One August 1, 2020 at 8:56 AM Ha! Good one!

Tom Cunningham August 1, 2020 at 1:55 AM Thankfully it was only the shoes lol. Tom

Caren Krutsinger July 31, 2020 at 4:21 PM This is hilarious!

Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2020 at 1:13 PM well, I am glad you didn't have her vanish along with those shoes, Alexis. Cute one!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 31, 2020 at 12:32 PM This is cute! I would be sad too; I’m a pretty free range gal, who digs red shoes ;), Have a fabulous weekend my friend, stay happy and safe, xomo

Michelle Faulkner July 31, 2020 at 11:25 AM What an adorable limerick on Sally Sue's red shoe, gave me a smile this morning :)