Deborah Burch Poet Tanka

Sakura

clustered sweet stars cling
fleetingly  pink  white  beauties
fragrant umbrellas
billowing warm pink blizzards
floating down gently on streams


©deborah burch
3/20/2012




*Sakura:Japanese Cherry Blossoms

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Kim Merryman April 4, 2012 at 2:03 PM A lovely picture. Congrats on your win, Deborah! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A April 3, 2012 at 10:22 PM DEBORAH , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD

Joyce Johnson April 2, 2012 at 6:25 PM Lovely words. Congratulations on your second. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi April 2, 2012 at 3:44 PM I'd love to see this! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 2, 2012 at 10:11 AM congrats Deborah on an awesome win for this elegant entry.. so visual and lovely.. a delight .. luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown April 2, 2012 at 9:21 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Deborah. Love, Carol

George Aul March 24, 2012 at 1:57 PM Very nice picture..........George Deborah Burch March 26, 2012 at 6:02 PM Thank you dear George :) hugggsss~deb

Joann Grisetti March 22, 2012 at 11:41 PM A serene picture of April in Sasebo where they do resemble floating umbrellas. Deborah Burch March 23, 2012 at 12:47 AM Thank you so much Joann...Big Huggss,love~Deb

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2012 at 7:50 PM Absolutely beautiful, Deborah! Deborah Burch March 23, 2012 at 12:46 AM Thank you Andrea soooo much...this is my first attempt at Tanka...I went traditional...lol...Big Hug,love~Deb