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As you are a Saint They two are angels In my little heaven Where gardens are grand Flowers always in bloom Sentiments flowing under the moon I dream of a kiss sharing these words with flowing curves Of delight Bringing heaven down to earth How absurd?

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Date: 12/7/2017 5:09:00 PM
If we bring heaven here we have no where else to go. These are beautiful words you have given us.
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Date: 12/6/2017 8:55:00 AM
Beautiful Poem Arthur! Vickie
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Date: 12/4/2017 10:48:00 PM
Oh, this is lovely, Art :) Not absurd at all! This is beautiful <3
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Date: 12/4/2017 1:22:00 PM
- If heaven was on earth ... I can not give you heaven ... but can blow you a kiss - Lovely written, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2017 12:47:00 PM
It is not absurd.... excellent
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Date: 12/4/2017 11:41:00 AM
Imaginative...creative...and possible....All the best Arthur
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Date: 12/4/2017 10:52:00 AM
the messenger of peace truly showed the light to you... watch out for the fake ones, arthur... superbly expressed!...huggs
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Date: 12/4/2017 9:54:00 AM
Lovely poem, Arthur and your note is true, though I do believe in a literal heaven:)
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Date: 12/4/2017 3:35:00 AM
Lovely poem Art, I can dream up some of these too :)
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