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sailor's warning

sailor red sunrise warm rays tame wild sea ripples ~ nautical warning

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Date: 4/27/2024 11:55:00 AM
nice one Tania enjoyed hugs Shadow
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/27/2024 2:13:00 PM
Shadow, thank you.
Date: 4/20/2024 11:04:00 AM
Dear Tania, your haiku poetically shows the delicate balance between the serenity of sunrise and the untamed power of the sea. It's nature's beauty and its unpredictable essence. Your words capture the essence of anticipation and caution, echoing the wisdom passed down through generations of sailors. Keep harnessing the power of brevity to evoke such rich imagery. - Blessings, Daniel
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/20/2024 11:53:00 AM
Daniel, thank you.
Date: 4/19/2024 10:19:00 AM
It amazes me how the sailors of old could read the weather and what it would bring, sailors today would be lost without modern gadgets. Enjoy your weekend Tania. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2024 3:41:00 PM
Tom, thank you.
Date: 4/19/2024 9:22:00 AM
A red sailor at night. Usually intoxicated. A red sailor in the morning. Ship has left. That's a warning.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2024 3:41:00 PM
Paul, thanks for your visit.
Date: 4/18/2024 2:37:00 PM
love the poem based on the old saying:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/18/2024 3:57:00 PM
Jan, thank you.
Date: 4/18/2024 1:14:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku  write. The sea is powerful... Enjoy your day writing away.............
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/18/2024 1:42:00 PM
Paula, thank you.

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