Sailor's Song

Crimson red sailor's sky too soon devoured,
 shadowed contemplative horizon set,
brush faded on concrete gravestone flowered.
 promises denied from a lover's debt,

Rapture forever,  wind gale staggered free,
  breathe lithe love back across this distant span
salt foam tossing in humbled majesty
 edging in shallow sands, a rhythmic stand.

Once sent furtive dreams, kisses in each  crest
   pounded surf, nonchalant waves kinetic,
 whales whistling, anguished from their very breast,
   vestige song, purest love lost ascetic.

Suffuse me back out to the raging seas
 no longer is there a reason to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 3:55 PM
A poignant sonnet DM,with powerful imagery and excellent use of the required words, which melt into the beauty of your poem effortlessly. Congratulations on your wonderful placement in the contest. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Roper Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Congratulations on your win, great depiction of the sea . Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Lovely imagery. Congrats and well done, DM.
Hamilton Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Congrats DM on placing in my contest!
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