Sailor Boy

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Fearless sailor boy, the wide open seas are calling, As the whistles of thrushes, when no one is talking. Royal destiny and daring, has led you here this day, And deep thirst for adventure, will sweep you away! Always your heart has known, one day you'd set sail, Into the golden horizon, where contentment prevails; But the tears you leave behind, has caused you sighs, Someday you'll be returning, as true love never dies!

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/26/2021 7:19:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, Your chosen words created such a lovely scene filled with stunning imagery. I could just picture the sailor sailing in the vast ocean—good last line. I enjoyed the read. Ps, I enjoyed the instrumental rendition of “ Sailing” I like the song as well. Have a good day and weekend:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/26/2021 7:35:00 PM

Hi Alexis, Thank you for your inspiring thoughts on this poem. I'm so happy that you found it meaningful. Also, thank you for your appreciation of my song choice, as well. Have a lovely evening and weekend yourself. :D Evelyn

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/26/2021 12:43:00 PM

Hello Evelyn, yes true love never dies. This is a wonderful poem. Enjoy your day my friend. Blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/26/2021 3:21:00 PM

Hello Evelyn, thank you for the lovely comment I am pleased that my comments ot you brings sunshine. God bless. Darlene

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/26/2021 1:09:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. Your wonderful comments always bring sunshine. Please enjoy your day as well, my friend. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/26/2021 12:18:00 PM

Beautiful sentiments Evelyn. I wish I loved sailing but seasickness would prevent me.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/26/2021 12:59:00 PM

Thank you, Victor. I believe I would have that problem, too. :D

Judy Ball

Date: 3/26/2021 8:03:00 AM

Beautiful sentimental piece Evelyn. Love the pic. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/26/2021 11:01:00 AM

Thank you very much, Judy. I was inspired by the song, 'Soldier Boy.' All my best, Evelyn