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Sailing Relentless Sea

T'was the month of July should've been sailing upon calm sea, brightest sunshine blue sky so clear. For days and days, it rained and rained As if the sky's afallin' away, Bounced wildly about on wall like waves T'was death we came to face. Tied ourselves with ropes around our waist To not to sea be blown and swallowed away The only thing for us all to do, was pray Then mates and the capt'n their voices did raise. Began singing aloud sailor's songs of old Drowning out their dread in the sea's assault Sudden shower of sunbeams began to pour right out Of the opening heavens by gushes of wind, parting clouds. Hope returned about the crew They knew the sea would be subdued Looking through his spyglass out to sea The capt'n saw our destination appear. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 05.16.11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/17/2011 5:47:00 PM
this is so amazingly done I am so happy I read it tonight.. cory
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Date: 5/17/2011 1:12:00 PM
I really like the theme of your poem. I sometimes go to hear sailors sing sea chanytys. They have not as yet included my poetry in the litergy but I have gotten some nice comments on it! I think you meant "waist" instead of "waste". Keep up the good poetry! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/17/2011 1:08:00 PM
beautiful enjoyable write on sailing in the sea, caroline, thanks for sharing this journey,
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Date: 5/17/2011 11:10:00 AM
I am so pleased to have had the pleasure to read your outstanding poetry this afternoon Caroline. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hoping you have a week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 7:30:00 AM
This almost sings like a song of the ancient mariner....can taste the salt air, and feel the ocean in my face! Nicely done, Caroline!
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Date: 5/17/2011 7:02:00 AM
What an awesome journey here. Very intense.
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:50:00 PM
we sure have a link ... bout ocean this time.. perhaps we are closer in mind... more than we think,,, the ocean of time ... interupts ... our time line... and words you do utter i think strange collusion of mind love Don
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