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Sailing Leaf

a leaf falls
the water ripples
nature's boat sails away

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Susan Ashley

October 28, 2017 at 10:20 PM

A fantastic and delightful haiku Madeleine. Enjoyed!

Andrea Dietrich

October 1, 2016 at 7:16 PM

this is such an absolute delight. BIG congrats on your win. One of my favorites on the list.

Madeleine Mclaughlin

October 2, 2016 at 11:19 AM

Thanks so much for your enthusiasm.

Beautiful Scars

September 30, 2016 at 12:58 PM

beautiful...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Madeleine Mclaughlin

October 2, 2016 at 11:18 AM

Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

February 22, 2013 at 6:41 PM

this one I had seen before was just fantastic. One of my favorites. congrats, madeleine.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 22, 2013 at 1:39 AM

Hi congratulations, great haiku, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

Poet Destroyer A

February 21, 2013 at 6:14 PM

Madeleine,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

Kim Merryman

March 21, 2012 at 4:10 PM

Congrats on your HM in PD's contest, Madeleine! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 19, 2012 at 6:27 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Madeleine. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 18, 2012 at 5:26 PM

This is wonderful. madeleleine. I don't think you ever read our blogs here. Just to let you know. PD likes all her contest entries to have their names on the bottom, so next time you do one of her contests, you will have a better chance to get a nicer win by putting your name. THis deserved to be higher on the list. Congrats on the HM.

Ralph Taylor

March 16, 2012 at 8:43 AM

Congrats on your win, Madeleine. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

March 15, 2012 at 10:59 PM

M.M.,, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Kash Poet

June 28, 2011 at 7:32 AM

Wonderful imagery here.Thanks for visiting my poem'Sitting face to face'.

P Sheart

October 4, 2009 at 1:12 PM

Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty

Brian Strand

October 1, 2009 at 11:52 PM

One for my favourites Madeleine.Nice work.Rgds Brian

Veronica Joseph

September 28, 2009 at 1:10 PM

these words say "fall" to me - congratulations on this wonderful poem being featured.

September 26, 2009 at 3:45 PM

PS--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

James Fraser

September 25, 2009 at 4:20 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Neva Brown

September 24, 2009 at 3:03 PM

I love the simplicity ! Amazing, how you can a story, with so few words.

September 24, 2009 at 2:15 PM

Wow! So much said in just three lines. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen