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Sailing Leaf

a leaf falls
the water ripples
nature's boat sails away

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/28/2017 10:20:00 PM

A fantastic and delightful haiku Madeleine. Enjoyed!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2016 7:16:00 PM

this is such an absolute delight. BIG congrats on your win. One of my favorites on the list.

Madeleine Mclaughlin
Date: 10/2/2016 11:19:00 AM

Thanks so much for your enthusiasm.

Beautiful Scars

Date: 9/30/2016 12:58:00 PM

beautiful...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Madeleine Mclaughlin
Date: 10/2/2016 11:18:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2013 6:41:00 PM

this one I had seen before was just fantastic. One of my favorites. congrats, madeleine.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/22/2013 1:39:00 AM

Hi congratulations, great haiku, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2013 6:14:00 PM

Madeleine,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/21/2012 4:10:00 PM

Congrats on your HM in PD's contest, Madeleine! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 6:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Madeleine. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2012 5:26:00 PM

This is wonderful. madeleleine. I don't think you ever read our blogs here. Just to let you know. PD likes all her contest entries to have their names on the bottom, so next time you do one of her contests, you will have a better chance to get a nicer win by putting your name. THis deserved to be higher on the list. Congrats on the HM.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/16/2012 8:43:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Madeleine. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:59:00 PM

M.M.,, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Kash Poet

Date: 6/28/2011 7:32:00 AM

Wonderful imagery here.Thanks for visiting my poem'Sitting face to face'.

P Sheart

Date: 10/4/2009 1:12:00 PM

Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty

Brian Strand

Date: 10/1/2009 11:52:00 PM

One for my favourites Madeleine.Nice work.Rgds Brian

Veronica Joseph

Date: 9/28/2009 1:10:00 PM

these words say "fall" to me - congratulations on this wonderful poem being featured.

Date: 9/26/2009 3:45:00 PM

PS--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

James Fraser

Date: 9/25/2009 4:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Neva Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 3:03:00 PM

I love the simplicity ! Amazing, how you can a story, with so few words.

Date: 9/24/2009 2:15:00 PM

Wow! So much said in just three lines. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen