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Sailing By Like Fresh Whipped Cream

Rowed my skiff 'long a gentle stream Afternoon sailed by like fresh whipped cream When of a sudden, the sky did gleam with myriad stars, nighttime's regime ... As I took in this scene, I found myself riding a pounding ocean's foaming surf My peaceful stream naught but an estuary My oars commandeered by a playful faerie

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Date: 7/21/2023 3:11:00 PM
Penned with astonishing beauty, G! From start to finish! Well done, Pangie
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Date: 7/22/2023 8:42:00 PM
Thanks for the sweet comment, Pangie. Appreciated. :) gw
Date: 7/18/2023 9:17:00 AM
Well written couplet Gershon. Creative and fun to read :)
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Date: 7/22/2023 8:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi.
Date: 7/17/2023 8:47:00 PM
Beautiful.... so dreamy too ! 'Whipped cream' and' playful faerie' give an other worldly touch to the poem.
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Date: 7/22/2023 8:43:00 PM
Appreciate your encouragement, Valsa! :) gw
Date: 7/17/2023 6:29:00 AM
A delightful write, Gershon! Blessings, Kim M
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2023 7:57:00 PM
Appreciate your appreciation, Kim.
Date: 7/17/2023 4:10:00 AM
I agree with Kim, Gershon, some top notch imagery here and a pleasure to read!! Happy Monday sir !!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2023 7:57:00 PM
'Top-notch' -- Thank you, Mike. Rhymes with 'hop-scotch' too.
Date: 7/17/2023 3:25:00 AM
Just cool imagery (cool whip) ;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2023 7:50:00 PM
Truly a 'mayonnaise moment' or two...
Date: 7/16/2023 11:36:00 PM
beautiful penning, it sounds like vacation here, thanks for sharing
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2023 7:45:00 PM
Good time for a vacation, for a Midsummer's Night Dream, as Shakespeare would have it. :)

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