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Sailing Beneath the Silver Moon

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On his long journey back to the North Pole Santa Claus sailed beneath the silver moon Frosty waved to Saint Nick, that jolly soul And carolers did sing each Christmas tune Santa Claus sailed beneath the silver moon After delivering all of the toys And carolers did sing each Christmas tune Saint Nick brought joy to all the girls and boys After delivering all of the toys In a winter wonderland graced with snow Saint Nick brought joy to all the girls and boys And he could be heard saying ho ho ho In a winter wonderland graced with snow Frosty waved to Saint Nick, that jolly soul And he could be heard saying ho ho ho On his long journey back to the North Pole 1-5-2020 Christmas Pantoum Rhyme Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Eve Roper Photo 2

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2020 12:52:00 AM

I am so happy to see this favorite poem of mine in 1st Place, Joseph. It is very deserving. Congratulations! xxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 1/25/2020 7:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your very well-deserved win, Joseph. I want to thank you for entering my contest. Your poem had great flow, perfect rhyme , and imagery.Hugs Eve

Joseph May
Date: 1/26/2020 5:51:00 PM

Thank you so much for my top placement Eve..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2020 3:14:00 AM

An awesome entry for the contest, wish you the best of luck but don't think you need it. Blessings, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/10/2020 11:21:00 PM

Awe, I like this. Your words bring a smile. :) Santa is a Jolly soul indeed. You have created such a magical moment. This should place high in the contest. It's a winner. :) Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/8/2020 4:45:00 PM

Wow Joseph, superbly written! I hope it is a top winner! It is going into my faves! New Year blessings, Connie xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 1/7/2020 6:03:00 PM

what a super festive pantoum, I do enjoy reading and writing this form, good luck with the contest Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2020 3:40:00 PM

way to go, doing a late Xmas pantoum. I really need to work on this too. Oh my, so behind with this one and others!! you did well, Joseph.

David Mchattie

Date: 1/6/2020 9:54:00 PM

A fine Christmas poem. I may have to try a pantoum poem. Have a great day.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2020 12:54:00 PM

- A lovely poem, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/6/2020 8:10:00 AM

You captured that photo brilliantly in your poem, Joseph--great job with this hard to write form.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/5/2020 8:54:00 PM

A beautiful Christmas pantoum. Bravo! A fun one to read.