Joseph May Poet Pantoum

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Sailing Beneath the Silver Moon

On his long journey back to the North Pole 
  Santa Claus sailed beneath the silver moon
 Frosty waved to Saint Nick, that jolly soul
  And carolers did sing each Christmas tune

 Santa Claus sailed beneath the silver moon
  After delivering all of the toys
 And carolers did sing each Christmas tune
 Saint Nick brought joy to all the girls and boys

 After delivering all of the toys
  In a winter wonderland graced with snow
 Saint Nick brought joy to all the girls and boys 
 And he could be heard saying ho ho ho 

 In a winter wonderland graced with snow
  Frosty waved to Saint Nick, that jolly soul
  And he could be heard saying ho ho ho
 On his long journey back to the North Pole

 1-5-2020
 Christmas Pantoum Rhyme Poetry Contest.
 Sponsor: Eve Roper
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Connie Marcum Wong January 26, 2020 at 12:52 AM I am so happy to see this favorite poem of mine in 1st Place, Joseph. It is very deserving. Congratulations! xxoo

Eve Roper January 25, 2020 at 7:59 PM Congratulations on your very well-deserved win, Joseph. I want to thank you for entering my contest. Your poem had great flow, perfect rhyme , and imagery.Hugs Eve Joseph May January 26, 2020 at 5:51 PM Thank you so much for my top placement Eve..

Jennifer Proxenos January 15, 2020 at 3:14 AM An awesome entry for the contest, wish you the best of luck but don't think you need it. Blessings, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole January 10, 2020 at 11:21 PM Awe, I like this. Your words bring a smile. :) Santa is a Jolly soul indeed. You have created such a magical moment. This should place high in the contest. It's a winner. :) Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong January 8, 2020 at 4:45 PM Wow Joseph, superbly written! I hope it is a top winner! It is going into my faves! New Year blessings, Connie xxoo

Jan Allison January 7, 2020 at 6:03 PM what a super festive pantoum, I do enjoy reading and writing this form, good luck with the contest Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 7, 2020 at 3:40 PM way to go, doing a late Xmas pantoum. I really need to work on this too. Oh my, so behind with this one and others!! you did well, Joseph.

David Mchattie January 6, 2020 at 9:54 PM A fine Christmas poem. I may have to try a pantoum poem. Have a great day.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2020 at 12:54 PM - A lovely poem, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit January 6, 2020 at 8:10 AM You captured that photo brilliantly in your poem, Joseph--great job with this hard to write form.

Caren Krutsinger January 5, 2020 at 8:54 PM A beautiful Christmas pantoum. Bravo! A fun one to read.