Sailing

Traverse autumn wind
   unfettered, wispy, gliding 
          sail to destiny

natureseasonsautumnhaiku

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Jack Horne

November 3, 2013 at 11:04 AM

love this, my friend. Hope you are having a great weekend. My vampire book and the co write poetry book were finally released, and the vampire novel was accepted. Hope things are easier for you with J. Hi to Andrea xx

Brandee Augustus

September 24, 2010 at 1:48 PM

Really like your last line and I love how you wrote it as if the leaves are "sailing". Congratulations on your 12th place win.

James Fraser

September 13, 2010 at 12:59 PM

Many congratulations Audrey with this delightful Haiku >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 7, 2010 at 3:55 AM

Congratulations on your win Audrey in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

September 6, 2010 at 4:38 PM

lovely imagery, congrats on your win

Robert A. Dufresne

September 6, 2010 at 2:18 PM

nice job Audrey...it's like yoiur words are riding the leaves in the wind...and the leaves riding your words. Wonderful. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2010 at 11:00 AM

Audrey, this is so weird. I just went to congratulate you and my message disappeared!! I said I loved the way you used these neat words in your haiku. LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2010 at 10:59 AM

Great words you used here, Audrey. How is your weekend? Well, it's still a weekend for ME anyway! Glad to see you in the winner's circle. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

September 6, 2010 at 4:19 AM

Audrey, congrats on your win in Rick's contest with your beautiful Haiku, love Wilma

Connie Marcum Wong

September 5, 2010 at 10:10 PM

A wonderful haiku, and I am so happy to see it win. Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 5, 2010 at 7:01 PM

Congratulations on the 12th place win in the contest, Audrey

Iolanda Scripca

September 5, 2010 at 5:58 PM

Beautiful comparison of a falling leaf to the act of sailing. Congratulations on you win, dear Audrey! Love, iolanda

Ralph Taylor

September 5, 2010 at 5:45 PM

Congrats, Audrey. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 5, 2010 at 5:10 PM

Congrats to my BBF on your winning poem in Rick's contest... a lovely write and super win my friend for u to enjoy tonight... we are HOME...at last..luv..your BBF...