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Determination To Move Forward >>>Vickie

 

He Longed To Sail Away From All His Broken Dreams...Even If His Sailing Was Done... In Puddles And Streams. Vickie Thayer's Poetry To Ponder.

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Sailing

he longed to sail away,

from all his broken dreams, 

even If, 

his sailing was done,

In muddy puddles and streams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gist Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 2:05 PM
Sounds like a distant past life of mine. Good job!
Thayer Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 1:30 PM
Thanks J..('
Ryder Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:27 AM
Having sold my old yacht this speaks to me. Beautifully concise.
Thayer Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Glad It Did...Lisle
May Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Well expressed Vickie..best wishes
Thayer Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 12:01 PM
Thanks Joseph..,Best Wishes To You, Too.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 9:15 PM
Oh a GEM! Love em brief and potent. A fave :) xomo!
Thayer Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Thanks Much, Maureen...(;
One Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 1:21 PM
If only it was so simple to escape..
Thayer Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 6:34 PM
True...I wish ,sometimes.
Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Well done. Lovely, Vickie.
Thayer Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 6:34 PM
Thanks..,
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