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Determination To Move Forward >>>Vickie

He Longed To Sail Away From All His Broken Dreams...Even If His Sailing Was Done... In Puddles And Streams. Vickie Thayer's Poetry To Ponder.

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he longed to sail away, from all his broken dreams, even If, his sailing was done, In muddy puddles and streams.

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Date: 9/21/2018 2:05:00 PM

Sounds like a distant past life of mine. Good job!

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 4/9/2019 1:30:00 PM

Thanks J..('

Date: 9/12/2018 4:27:00 AM

Having sold my old yacht this speaks to me. Beautifully concise.

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 4/9/2019 1:31:00 PM

Glad It Did...Lisle

Date: 7/22/2018 8:24:00 AM

Well expressed Vickie..best wishes

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 7/23/2018 12:01:00 PM

Thanks Joseph..,Best Wishes To You, Too.

Date: 6/13/2018 9:15:00 PM

Oh a GEM! Love em brief and potent. A fave :) xomo!

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 7/23/2018 12:02:00 PM

Thanks Much, Maureen...(;

Date: 6/13/2018 1:21:00 PM

If only it was so simple to escape..

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 7/21/2018 6:34:00 PM

True...I wish ,sometimes.

Date: 6/13/2018 12:52:00 PM

Well done. Lovely, Vickie.

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 7/21/2018 6:34:00 PM

Thanks..,