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Poetry/Verse/sailboat
Copyright Protected, ID P-6-1741253-23
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, June 23, 2025
For the International Contest, VISIONS OF A VIGNETTE 2
Sponsor, Netter Onclaud, Judged 06/25/2025

Second Place

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sailboat



I sail
in my dream world
on waters glassed
towards my own true north
the wind fills billowing sails
as birds glide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Fowler Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 7:15 AM
:..my own true north..." - perfect dear Constance. Follow your own path. Nice verse, and belated congrats! :)
La France Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 8:06 AM
Linda, thank you for the nice comment, compliment and congrats, appreciate, Constance
Onclaud Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 6:14 PM
masterclass of poetry , constance...your ink spills with artistic images...sweet congrats on your impressive and thanks for sailing by my contest!
La France Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Nette, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and for your nice comment, compliment and congrats, Constance
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 1:54 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K
La France Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 9:47 AM
Sara, thank you for the congratulations and comment, Constance
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Hello Constance, I picture this scene in my imagination. i see it there it is a lovey spot. Friendship & Love, /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 12:03 PM
Hello Constance, On Tuesday i went to the S.P.C.A. to bring left over food that Sparkles had. While there I looked at cats. twice. Then i adopted one. She is a Tabby. Her name is Stormy and she is 5 yeas old. i wanted you to know. Your welcome for the comment. Love, and Friendship, Darlene/
La France Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Darlene, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings, Constance
May Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 9:52 AM
Nicely done Constance, GL in the Contest
La France Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Joseph, thank you for the compliment and encouragement, Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 7:59 AM
“in my dreamy” perhaps a noun…I like it! 3rd, 5th, and 6th line fill out the poem and I sail… I think this could be a winner!
La France Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 9:49 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment, and encouragement, Constance
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