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Poetry/Verse/sailboat
Copyright Protected, ID P-6-1741253-23
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, June 23, 2025
For the International Contest, VISIONS OF A VIGNETTE 2
Sponsor, Netter Onclaud, Judged 06/25/2025

Second Place

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I sail in my dream world on waters glassed towards my own true north the wind fills billowing sails as birds glide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/1/2025 7:15:00 AM
:..my own true north..." - perfect dear Constance. Follow your own path. Nice verse, and belated congrats! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2025 8:06:00 AM
Linda, thank you for the nice comment, compliment and congrats, appreciate, Constance
Date: 6/26/2025 6:14:00 PM
masterclass of poetry , constance...your ink spills with artistic images...sweet congrats on your impressive and thanks for sailing by my contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/27/2025 9:45:00 AM
Nette, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and for your nice comment, compliment and congrats, Constance
Date: 6/25/2025 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K
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Constance La France
Date: 6/27/2025 9:47:00 AM
Sara, thank you for the congratulations and comment, Constance
Date: 6/23/2025 3:44:00 PM
Hello Constance, I picture this scene in my imagination. i see it there it is a lovey spot. Friendship & Love, /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/27/2025 12:03:00 PM
Hello Constance, On Tuesday i went to the S.P.C.A. to bring left over food that Sparkles had. While there I looked at cats. twice. Then i adopted one. She is a Tabby. Her name is Stormy and she is 5 yeas old. i wanted you to know. Your welcome for the comment. Love, and Friendship, Darlene/
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Constance La France
Date: 6/27/2025 9:48:00 AM
Darlene, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings, Constance
Date: 6/23/2025 9:52:00 AM
Nicely done Constance, GL in the Contest
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Constance La France
Date: 6/27/2025 9:48:00 AM
Joseph, thank you for the compliment and encouragement, Constance
Date: 6/23/2025 7:59:00 AM
“in my dreamy” perhaps a noun…I like it! 3rd, 5th, and 6th line fill out the poem and I sail… I think this could be a winner!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/27/2025 9:49:00 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment, and encouragement, Constance

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