sailboat

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Written, June 23, 2025
For the International Contest, VISIONS OF A VIGNETTE 2
Sponsor, Netter Onclaud

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I sail in my dream world on waters glassed towards my own true north the wind fills billowing sails as birds glide

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/23/2025 3:44:00 PM

Hello Constance, I picture this scene in my imagination. i see it there it is a lovey spot. Friendship & Love, /Darlene/

Joseph May

Date: 6/23/2025 9:52:00 AM

Nicely done Constance, GL in the Contest

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/23/2025 7:59:00 AM

“in my dreamy” perhaps a noun…I like it! 3rd, 5th, and 6th line fill out the poem and I sail… I think this could be a winner!