Sailboat

blue and white sailboat
      rocking on the water’s edge
             rippling reflection
    waits for the next ride to start
     freed by the wind on the lake

Heidi Sands

9/25/19

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Vijay Pandit

September 25, 2019 at 6:04 PM

Superb ending--a lovely poem, Heidi.

Heidi Sands

September 25, 2019 at 6:06 PM

Thank you Vijay !

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 25, 2019 at 5:56 PM

Hello Heidi, I have only been on a sailboat once, and enjoyed it. have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 26, 2019 at 5:08 PM

Hello Heidi, yes I did have a nice time,we had snack foods and drinks. I enjoyed to be on the water. have a nice evening my friend.

Heidi Sands

September 25, 2019 at 5:59 PM

I hope you had a nice time Darlene. There is a nice one here nearby at the bay. Thank you :)

Hello There

September 25, 2019 at 5:44 PM

A joyful reflection ~ with this weather, he shouldn't be waiting too long :)

Heidi Sands

September 25, 2019 at 5:46 PM

Thank you HT ! You are right. This weather is perfect. It shouldn't be long. I appreciate your comment :)

Chris Green

September 25, 2019 at 3:25 PM

It's like I take a wonderful vacation to the northeast each time I visit your poetry my friend. Beautiful Heidi

Heidi Sands

September 25, 2019 at 3:30 PM

That makes me happy to hear that Chris! I like to share beautiful things from here. It is a wonderful place to visit. Many tourists still flowing in and there will be more with the foliage. Thank you for your kindness, it also reaches my heart :)

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