Said My Eyes

Said my eyes
Your picture has a vibe 
that -
holds me,
rolls me,
rocks me,
tease me,
infatuates me,
indulges me,
hair raising and self touching .
Get your mind out of the gutter.
I am just talking about
touching my own arms, chest and yes my tummy.
I just love the tingling and trembling.
The rest can wait.
But the truth is I don't know how long
since my shameful mind lingers so much.
I am now walking, eating, sleeping, ,dreaming, 
I mean everything with an image of a photograph's effect.
You are something girl.
just don't wait till I self destruct.
© Al. Juman  The "said" Poet  7/3/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/21/2018 4:04:00 PM
You are a gifted romantic and you have all the wonderful skills to craft magically craft your thoughts into words! You're the man, Al! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 7/12/2016 8:49:00 PM
Very well emoted,described poem,but you made me laugh about self destruct.. Still smiling to me self:)
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Al Juman
Date: 7/12/2016 10:17:00 PM
Thank you Cheryl I do try my best sometimes to creative
Date: 7/7/2016 2:50:00 AM
nice poem... the self destruct word is something i don't expect... girls love to hang us sometimes in the air...
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Date: 7/8/2016 8:48:00 PM
Thank you for looking me up glad you like it
Date: 7/4/2016 6:48:00 AM
Very good analysis ... with a note of caution too ... Nice ...
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Al Juman
Date: 7/8/2016 8:50:00 PM
Thank you my friend-- your patience I like to spend the time to read my stuff
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