Sahasrara

baby’s fontanel
in-pours divine miracles 
closed cave delusion
lifetime spent piercing the crown
to connect with universe

03-May-2021

spiritualtanka

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Caren Krutsinger

May 4, 2021 at 12:28 PM

Ethereal and beautifully; exquisite write.

Victor Buhagiar

May 4, 2021 at 1:52 AM

Strange I'm incapable of meditation.

Unseeking Seeker

May 4, 2021 at 5:20 AM

thought rested silence, melding with slowly shifting amber hues of a beauteous sunset, just present, with softened attention, in agendaless vibrancy

Harry Horsman

May 3, 2021 at 11:32 PM

Wonderful poetry. Love the form and the poem, I wonder if you are into Yoga?

Unseeking Seeker

May 4, 2021 at 12:44 AM

Thanks, Harry. Mindfulness meditation

David Kavanagh

May 3, 2021 at 4:10 PM

Great work seeker, love the approach you take on life experience, very deep and cerebral, excellent tanka, cheers David

Unseeking Seeker

May 4, 2021 at 12:45 AM

Thank you, David

Andrea Dietrich

May 3, 2021 at 3:00 PM

DEEP one. well done!!

Unseeking Seeker

May 4, 2021 at 12:45 AM

Thanks for dropping by, Andrea!

Sam Kauffman

May 3, 2021 at 12:39 PM

I am drawn mystically into your richly drawn images, Seeker - truly an illustration of your name - a life quest! Wonderful tanka! Blessings for your journey.

Unseeking Seeker

May 4, 2021 at 12:45 AM

Thank you, Sam