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Saggin'

A loose belt and a pair of boxers underneath Coolin', stylin', and profilin' with a fresh new pair of kicks on the feet Saggin', draggin', loose and not together Constantly pullin' and tuggin'...just straighten 'em up or take 'em off, brother Swagga! Not! Just draggin' and saggin' with major attitude Belts are like beepers, totally obsolete, brother looking like he has something to prove A fashion statement of diminutive proportions, I mean, really? Just a fresh pair of sneakers, a pair of pants that don't fit and a white tee But what is looming as great as God's blue sky is "tude," that's right, major, major "tude"! Mean muggin', adrenaline flowing, and stayed on high Come on, man! Find some quiet and let go. I mean, really dude!? Let him tell it; there is nothing wrong with his gait He can't see, 'cause if he could, he would even say it's not straight The ticket is straightening up the spine and getting inline to move forward And maybe, just maybe, he has something to prove. 'Cause as long as he walks around saggin', he will be viewed as saggin' spelled backward

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/30/2017 2:45:00 PM
WoW! Oh man, Stewart, no you didn't! Yeah, that was a bombshell of an ending. Didn't see it coming ... got hit by a straight right cross flush on the cranial jaw. POW! Great poem, my talented pen friend. Made me smile, chuckle, frown, tear up and laugh at some point or another while reading this most delightful and insightful poem. You got the gift of golden poetic expression, ain't no doubt about it. Top-notch poetry! Must fave poetry. Love and more love forever. Romantic Warrior
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Stewart Watkins
Date: 11/30/2017 3:53:00 PM
Thanks, Freddie!

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