sagesse

A man
Who does not know how to listen
The birds,
is a lost man,

He is not master
Of his thoughts,
He is not master
of his life,

A man
Who does not know how to listen
Birds, 
Does not know how to listen to his wife,

A man so made
who don’t listen to birds,
Does not often know
What he’s talking about.


Un homme
Qui ne sait écouter
Les oiseaux,,
est un homme perdu,

Il n’est pas maître
De ses pensées,
Il n’est pas maître
de sa vie,

Un homme
Qui ne sait écouter
Les oiseaux, 
Ne sait écouter sa femme,

Un homme ainsi fait
qui n’écoute les oiseaux,
Ne sait pas souvent
De quoi il parle.
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Kendrick Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:48 PM
I like this one, Yann. It is not easy to learn to be a good listener and there a very few of them in the world, but if you meet a good listener, draw them in, encourage them to be your friend. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Way to go. 👍👏✍️..Sara K.
Leach Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 11:06 AM
Your poem has a quiet wisdom to it, with a rhythm that feels almost like a proverb or philosophical reflection. The repetition of a man who does not listen to birds creates a lyrical cadence, reinforcing the theme of being disconnected--from nature, from oneself, from others.
Rolland Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 1:21 AM
thank you so much dear alesia for the understanding and commenting nicely, really appreciated your stopping by
Rose  Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 3:50 PM
Your beautiful poems always make me think and leave me always a tad wiser than before I started reading. thank you Yann
Rolland Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 7:38 PM
thank you so much Rose, for stopping by , enjoyed
M  Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 12:50 AM
A lot of wisdom right there Yann….beautifully written! Debx
Rolland Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 2:06 AM
thanks deb, for stopping by, all is pleasure to be read best wishes
Vaso Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 6:51 AM
Love this, I love also the original french version more!
M  Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 12:51 AM
Hi Arthur….how are you my friend! Debx
Brotherton Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Wise words my friend.
Rolland Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 10:39 PM
thanks for support, my friend
George Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 8:34 PM
A man who has no connection with the natural world and with birds and animals will not have any connection with fellow beings. All are God's creation. When one fails to understand this, he will be lacking love and soul. Beautiful thoughts dear Yaan.
Rolland Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 5:26 AM
thanks valsa for the emotional comment, words to be heard by anyone, have a nice week
Sharma  Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 6:30 PM
Oh wow! This is such an insightful and profound poem that conveys a really wise message. I love how you've used symbolism here whist metaphorically conveyed the depth of a situation! Your writing style is crisp yet so impactful here! Absolutely a pleasure reading this and you've chosen an intriguing title too, dear Yann. Sending you best wishes and light always!!
Rolland Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 5:28 AM
thanks Hiya for stopping by, and the delicious words, your support is appreciated, you write so well best wishes
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 2:33 AM
- The art of listening is important, Yann :) - Great written :) - hugs
Rolland Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 5:28 AM
thanks anne lise for stopping by and being supportive enjoyed
Singh Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 11:18 PM
I believe closeness to nature has many benefits for the brain.Poem very nice.TWD
Rolland Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 1:22 AM
you "nailed" it dear poet, thanks for stopping by, and generosity enjoy your week end
Empress Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 7:36 AM
Dear Yann, clever and wise write that flows just effortlessly, well written poem and i agree to the depth of what youv conveyed here! And creative title too, pleasure reading this. Sending you light always
Rolland Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 1:24 AM
thanks a lot Ie, i am touched by your enlightened comment, i don't seek poem, it comes as he does, have a wonderful week end my dear poet
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 5:09 PM
Hmmm I don't think my husband listens to them! Cool poem
Rolland Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 2:14 AM
thanks andrea for the humor touch best week end
Buehler Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 2:34 PM
It's so true that one must listen before he speaks, Yann. I enjoyed your sage poem. Best wishes. :)
Rolland Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 2:15 AM
great wisdom evelyn thanks
Hind Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 9:58 AM
Interesting poem - your sageful words, right :)
Rolland Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 2:16 AM
thanks paige have a nice week end
Rodgers Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 7:34 AM
Hello Yann, such sharp wisdom in its simplicity and the quiet power of listening. I love the way you draw parallels between not hearing the birds and not truly understanding oneself or others is striking. The idea of a man being lost without the ability to listen is such a compelling truth. Excellent Read! Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Rolland Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 2:17 AM
thanks daniel for the kind and supportive comment god bless you
Buhagiar Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 7:12 AM
A poignat poem. Man must understand what is around him Loved this poem.
Rolland Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 2:18 AM
thanks victor for stopping by
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 6:55 AM
Faved
Rolland Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 2:19 AM
blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 6:55 AM
I find this humorous as well as on point. My hubby heard bird song one day…he is close to retirement. :)
Rolland Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 2:18 AM
Thanks kim, for the smile, have a nice week end
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