sagesse

A man
Who does not know how to listen
The birds,
is a lost man,

He is not master
Of his thoughts,
He is not master
of his life,

A man
Who does not know how to listen
Birds, 
Does not know how to listen to his wife,

A man so made
who don’t listen to birds,
Does not often know
What he’s talking about.


Un homme
Qui ne sait écouter
Les oiseaux,,
est un homme perdu,

Il n’est pas maître
De ses pensées,
Il n’est pas maître
de sa vie,

Un homme
Qui ne sait écouter
Les oiseaux, 
Ne sait écouter sa femme,

Un homme ainsi fait
qui n’écoute les oiseaux,
Ne sait pas souvent
De quoi il parle.

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Date: 3/3/2025 11:06:00 AM
Your poem has a quiet wisdom to it, with a rhythm that feels almost like a proverb or philosophical reflection. The repetition of a man who does not listen to birds creates a lyrical cadence, reinforcing the theme of being disconnected--from nature, from oneself, from others.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 3/7/2025 1:21:00 AM
thank you so much dear alesia for the understanding and commenting nicely, really appreciated your stopping by
Date: 2/24/2025 3:50:00 PM
Your beautiful poems always make me think and leave me always a tad wiser than before I started reading. thank you Yann
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/26/2025 7:38:00 PM
thank you so much Rose, for stopping by , enjoyed
Date: 2/20/2025 12:50:00 AM
A lot of wisdom right there Yann….beautifully written! Debx
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/22/2025 2:06:00 AM
thanks deb, for stopping by, all is pleasure to be read best wishes
Date: 2/19/2025 6:51:00 AM
Love this, I love also the original french version more!
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Deb M
Date: 2/20/2025 12:51:00 AM
Hi Arthur….how are you my friend! Debx
Date: 2/16/2025 9:53:00 AM
Wise words my friend.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/16/2025 10:39:00 PM
thanks for support, my friend
Date: 2/15/2025 8:34:00 PM
A man who has no connection with the natural world and with birds and animals will not have any connection with fellow beings. All are God's creation. When one fails to understand this, he will be lacking love and soul. Beautiful thoughts dear Yaan.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/16/2025 5:26:00 AM
thanks valsa for the emotional comment, words to be heard by anyone, have a nice week
Date: 2/15/2025 6:30:00 PM
Oh wow! This is such an insightful and profound poem that conveys a really wise message. I love how you've used symbolism here whist metaphorically conveyed the depth of a situation! Your writing style is crisp yet so impactful here! Absolutely a pleasure reading this and you've chosen an intriguing title too, dear Yann. Sending you best wishes and light always!!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/16/2025 5:28:00 AM
thanks Hiya for stopping by, and the delicious words, your support is appreciated, you write so well best wishes
Date: 2/15/2025 2:33:00 AM
- The art of listening is important, Yann :) - Great written :) - hugs
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/16/2025 5:28:00 AM
thanks anne lise for stopping by and being supportive enjoyed
Date: 2/14/2025 11:18:00 PM
I believe closeness to nature has many benefits for the brain.Poem very nice.TWD
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/15/2025 1:22:00 AM
you "nailed" it dear poet, thanks for stopping by, and generosity enjoy your week end
Date: 2/14/2025 7:36:00 AM
Dear Yann, clever and wise write that flows just effortlessly, well written poem and i agree to the depth of what youv conveyed here! And creative title too, pleasure reading this. Sending you light always
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/15/2025 1:24:00 AM
thanks a lot Ie, i am touched by your enlightened comment, i don't seek poem, it comes as he does, have a wonderful week end my dear poet
Date: 2/13/2025 5:09:00 PM
Hmmm I don't think my husband listens to them! Cool poem
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/14/2025 2:14:00 AM
thanks andrea for the humor touch best week end
Date: 2/13/2025 2:34:00 PM
It's so true that one must listen before he speaks, Yann. I enjoyed your sage poem. Best wishes. :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/14/2025 2:15:00 AM
great wisdom evelyn thanks
Date: 2/13/2025 9:58:00 AM
Interesting poem - your sageful words, right :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/14/2025 2:16:00 AM
thanks paige have a nice week end
Date: 2/13/2025 7:34:00 AM
Hello Yann, such sharp wisdom in its simplicity and the quiet power of listening. I love the way you draw parallels between not hearing the birds and not truly understanding oneself or others is striking. The idea of a man being lost without the ability to listen is such a compelling truth. Excellent Read! Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/14/2025 2:17:00 AM
thanks daniel for the kind and supportive comment god bless you
Date: 2/13/2025 7:12:00 AM
A poignat poem. Man must understand what is around him Loved this poem.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/14/2025 2:18:00 AM
thanks victor for stopping by
Date: 2/13/2025 6:55:00 AM
I find this humorous as well as on point. My hubby heard bird song one day…he is close to retirement. :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/14/2025 2:18:00 AM
Thanks kim, for the smile, have a nice week end
Date: 2/13/2025 6:55:00 AM
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/14/2025 2:19:00 AM
blessings
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