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Safeway--California

Whispers crackers to the cheese, "Lean a little closer please... I'll bet the party's tomorrow night".. Cabernet shivered in sudden fright, The olives decided to bide their time, And snuggled closer to the lime... "Hope the party is a raging blast, 'Cause I think it's going to be our last!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/15/2010 11:54:00 AM
I did actually have a little laugh with this one. Congratulations on your second place win!
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Date: 8/12/2010 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Grocery Grammar ". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 8:47:00 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place Barbara, love Wilma
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Date: 8/10/2010 7:32:00 PM
VERY GOOD, BARbara. Exactly what they should be thinking! Congrats on 2nd place. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/10/2010 6:15:00 PM
Congrats on the 2nd place win, Barbara
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Date: 8/10/2010 4:56:00 PM
I think his is really funn. congratulations on your 2nd. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/10/2010 2:53:00 PM
This was adorable....loved it!! That last line nailed it so well !! :)
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:16:00 PM
Congrats BG on your second place win in my "Grocery Grammar" contest with this super write.. thankxx for supporting my contest endeavors..with luv..
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:26:00 PM
Oh, LNC, you outdid yourself with this one! I will never attend a party that endangers olives. LOL Enjoy that cabernet, though!! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/9/2010 12:52:00 PM
What a great poem. We used to have Safeways here in Oklahoma too, but they left the region. Best of luck in the contest, Shirley
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:47:00 AM
very adorable poem, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:22:00 AM
funny one!! LOL
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Date: 8/9/2010 4:17:00 AM
I love this !! Too, Too funny !
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