Safely Aloft

Happiness like a balloon must be handled with great care.
A very transitory thing, sometimes made of but air.

The bubble of content can burst from a less than kindly word,
Despondency replaces joy that had within you stirred.

Happiness to be of worth is made of stronger stuff.
It must originate from deep inside to ever be enough.

Happiness that must depend on another to support,
Is not the kind that will survive a storm of any sort.

True happiness is yours to earn and it can only stay
If anchored firmly to your faith so it won’t sail away.

Do not be afraid to let it float into the bright blue sky
As long as you hold tight to ties while remaining standing by

Written by Joyce Johnson 7/18/11 for Francine;s contest 
"Happiness is a Balloon"

won no.9
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ramsdale Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 1:08 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
Ramage Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Nice poem, congratulations on your win. Lee
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July 29, 2011 at 1:56 PM
Congrats Joyce on your win...beautiful poem.
Horne Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Lovely inspiring piece. Many congratulations, Joyce : )
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July 29, 2011 at 1:11 PM
Incredible writing, Joyce. You gave quite a message in your poem. I especially like the way you describe happiness as being anchored to faith. So true, dear. Delighted to see your poem in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Taylor Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Congrats on your win, Joyce. Excellent. Nice going. Thanks for your gracious comments on my win. You and yours have a great weekend. luv Ralph.
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July 29, 2011 at 8:47 AM
Very inspirational and uplifting, Joyce. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Brown Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations for your win in Francine's "Balloon" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Dillard Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 11:30 PM
Congratulations Joyce! I enjoy your work! RAY
Roberts Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 11:02 PM
congrats Joyce on your 9th place entry in the contest with this wonderful entry
Sweetheart Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 10:53 PM
Congrats Joyce on a superb win with this dynamic write for the balloon theme.. a beauty luv..
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 7:22 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Joyce. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol
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July 18, 2011 at 10:02 PM
Excellent advice my friend. Well done. God Bless, JB
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