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Safe Inside An Empty Pen

Wake up my dear. Speak, I need your soft whisp of thought so, I can write the muse of rhyme My mind is empty, but I hear the whistling of the wind trying to unleash the ties of words trickling in my mind 1/4/2022 inspired by "Bed Time" written by Victor Buhagiar

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Date: 1/10/2022 3:12:00 AM
Great setting and mood. Well penned.
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Date: 1/8/2022 11:25:00 AM
This is such a clever poem Eve, a wonderful creative write, although 'Safe in your Empty Pen'. May the New Year bring your every dream and desire to fruition and may peace reign for us all in this hopefully less challenging 2022. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/6/2022 8:23:00 AM
Ahhhh So delicate and pretty Eve!
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Date: 1/6/2022 3:40:00 AM
Lovely, Eve. Absolutely love this! Happy New Year my friend. Love & Hugs, Charlie
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Date: 1/5/2022 4:32:00 PM
Lovely piece, a poets lament….. Cheers, Paulette
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Date: 1/5/2022 11:43:00 AM
Hello Eve, well done. Hugs.
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Date: 1/5/2022 7:00:00 AM
Lovely. It's awesome. God's blessings on you, my friend.
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Date: 1/5/2022 3:12:00 AM
Beautiful. I love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/5/2022 1:59:00 AM
Glad you inspired someone. This early morning the muse tickled my brain. For better or worse I wrote a sonnet, Frost style. Lovely poem, my dear friend.
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