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Safe Distance Is a Painful Embrace

She ravaged all the romance Cheshire grinning with some kind of graceful guile Devouring the warmth of the glow, oh how we glowed!! Batting those lashes, fire flickers like dancers in the shine of her eyes...this is as close as we'll be I learned to be wise... as her heart belonged never to me Still she savored all the romance... My affection sufficed as a prize beheld only to her Foolish sir! to think an unfeeling heart could be revived This woman's no victim... More like an Emotional spy!! claiming twin Gemini as her alibi...which will show here today? The risk and reward became all too high ...until the (higher elevations=harder falls) equation added up ...all to often Her feelings are all attached at the surface of skin if only they flowed both ways and aroused within... hopelessly wrapped in her carnal craving If you knew truest sentiment was never attainable then why jump aboard sure-fire train wrecks? Yes, it was the sex....But be honest...you know you wanted more Selling yourself all the milk in the store...Consigned now, to the fact I long for her heart from this safe distance ........... Safe distance is a painful embrace

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Date: 1/4/2009 6:01:00 PM
I really like this. If I may offer a thought. I'm fond of repetition when its used to reinforce the main concept. I would like to see a third repetition of "She RAVAGED all the romance" "She SAVORED all the romance. Perhaps "She REJECTED truest sentiment ? to top off the end stanza! PS She was obviuosly a fool to let you go. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/4/2009 12:48:00 PM
Wow, I was amazed at this one! You're gifted, very gifted. Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 1/3/2009 8:07:00 AM
good poetry told in a story format and it really keeps the mind going.
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