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Since that day years and years ago, I have been s i l e n t - You HURT me to my core- I never expected that! Money was stronger than l o v e way back then and the price was high! Oh, the price of distance and silence . . . of years and years of nothingness I heard of your D E A T H today and again I am hurt- and remembering when y o u stood with this girl, as I picked my father's coffin, and other times - so TODAY, I say the unsayable- thanks and KISS you adieu with love! _______________________ November 22, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/"Sadness Unsayable" Copyright Protected, ID 17-964-373-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, UNSAYABLE sponsor, Nette Onclaud Third Place

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Date: 12/2/2017 11:28:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this very much. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 12/1/2017 2:18:00 PM
Broken Wings, returning with congratulation on your win with your deeply melancholic write. Warmest regards. ~Susan
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Date: 11/30/2017 5:50:00 PM
Wonderful, Broken Wings , ..Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/23/2017 8:16:00 PM
Oh Darn it! I wish I had read your entry before submitting my own as yours is clearly a winner. Beautifully written and so emotional.
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Date: 11/22/2017 7:54:00 PM
Hurt and forgiveness!
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Date: 11/22/2017 6:25:00 PM
A poignant and agonizing read. Good luck.
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Date: 11/22/2017 1:01:00 PM
very bittersweet one, Constance. This is an interesting challenge that I hope I can enter before it fills. We are having our family get together very soon, so I made what comments I could. I better hurry off. Have a great day, dear!
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Date: 11/22/2017 11:11:00 AM
Broken Wings, the depths of inconsolable sadness is deep in your beautifully expressive melancholic write. Good luck in the contest!
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