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Sadness Love

Origami dream Bonsai blossoms illusions Harakiri wish For Brian's Noun Haiku Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2013 11:13:00 AM

Good morning, IOLANDA;-) Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Have yourself a nice and sweet Sunday. ~Always & Forever *LINDA

Daver Austin

Date: 3/5/2013 10:20:00 AM

I liked this one so much, I looked up all the words. Congrats on the selection. daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/4/2010 1:23:00 AM

never expected that last line! A clever haiku that progresses from dream to harakiri, wow..congrats onyour win with this Iolanda :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/26/2010 6:10:00 AM

Dear Iolanda, Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Honorable Mention In Brian's Noun Haiku Contest Seppuku is a very sad ritual Excellently Penned ALWAYS...HG

Elaine George

Date: 1/26/2010 3:59:00 AM

Absolutely beaituful Haiku, Iolanda. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2010 12:38:00 PM

Interesting write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/25/2010 2:42:00 AM

Congratulations Iolanda, on placing in Brian’s Poetry of the Noun Haiku contest with these creative words. Your creativity is outstanding. Smiles, Dane Ann

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/25/2010 1:06:00 AM

A pleasure to read. well done.....Margaret

Linda Witt-King

Date: 1/24/2010 3:36:00 PM

Wow Iolanda! This is the first I've seen of your work. You've juxtaposed beauty and tragedy in so few words. Well done and congratulations on being mentioned. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

John Freeman

Date: 1/23/2010 5:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your much deserved mention. Sincerely, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2010 2:07:00 PM

oh , my goodness, I hadn't noticed you were on that winner's list too, Iolanda. HOW cool, my new friend won with her charming all noun haiku. You deserved it! andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/23/2010 1:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your lovely winning poem. Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/23/2010 11:21:00 AM

There is such a melancholy feel to this wonderful haiku....a well deserving win in Brian's contest!! Congratulations, Iolanda!! (It is raining hard in No. California too!! Stay warm, my friend :) ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/23/2010 11:19:00 AM

Congrats Iolanda on your winning poem in Brian's contest... wonderful words in your Haiku and well deserved win... blessings with luv... Linda-Marie..

Brian Strand

Date: 1/23/2010 8:44:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Iolanda.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'A RONDEL' is now open

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/22/2010 5:10:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry this evening Iolanda. Wishing you the best in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and that you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2010 8:53:00 AM

I agree with Carrie. A lovely image!

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/22/2010 7:55:00 AM

A lovely image! A lovely haiku!!

Brian Strand

Date: 1/21/2010 11:32:00 PM

Thank for for supporting my contest Iolanda.Rgds Brian

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/21/2010 9:24:00 PM

Interesting Haiku, very well written Iolanda! Good luck on the contest. I know, dear Iolanda, it s been raining here in L.A. county like cats and dogs as well. Keep dry. :) Best wishes, Caroline.