Sadness and Happiness

This poem is really written by the student VK/11 yrs. Read top down and then bottom up

Death destruction and despair
Destroying
Families and friends
Vanquish hope
Never
Say I love you
Always
Be sad
Do not
Be free
Hopelessness and poverty
Take over
The world
You will rule
Nothing
Dissipate the word
Happiness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ajmal Avatar
June 16, 2017 at 10:14 AM
A very beautiful written poem,that child must be clever and would definitely become a good writer however I m also 15 years old and new on this site, i would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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June 27, 2015 at 1:41 AM
Sheila, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love
Hay Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 10:14 AM
This is super! Really cleverly done, Kind Regards Laura.
Wigley Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 10:51 PM
Hi Sheila, tell your student that this is very clever. Regards, Viv
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June 4, 2015 at 11:28 PM
thank you for sharing this poem Sheila, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Cooperman Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Thank you, but this is really written by a student in my class. But, thanks, good to be here
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