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Sadness and Happiness

This poem is really written by the student VK/11 yrs. Read top down and then bottom up Death destruction and despair Destroying Families and friends Vanquish hope Never Say I love you Always Be sad Do not Be free Hopelessness and poverty Take over The world You will rule Nothing Dissipate the word Happiness

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/16/2017 10:14:00 AM

A very beautiful written poem,that child must be clever and would definitely become a good writer however I m also 15 years old and new on this site, i would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Skat A

Date: 6/27/2015 1:41:00 AM

Sheila, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love

Laura Hay

Date: 6/18/2015 10:14:00 AM

This is super! Really cleverly done, Kind Regards Laura.

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/17/2015 10:51:00 PM

Hi Sheila, tell your student that this is very clever. Regards, Viv

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2015 11:28:00 PM

thank you for sharing this poem Sheila, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sheila Cooperman
Date: 6/10/2015 12:19:00 PM

Thank you, but this is really written by a student in my class. But, thanks, good to be here