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Sadness

Sadness, weeping’s thief, leaving behind the ghost of memory. Sadness, idle sound of silenced footfalls. Sadness, thorny stem of tortured rose. Sadness, longing for the loss of loss. Sadness, soft prickly sting of love’s embrace. 2/9/2017 submitted to - Sadness – Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/17/2017 10:53:00 PM
I love how you approaches the theme of this contest, John. The repetition adds to the poignancy...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/9/2017 4:04:00 PM
Sadness, the great vampire...great verse John...god bless...^WW^
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John Lawless
Date: 2/9/2017 4:39:00 PM
Oh, I wish I had thought of that line WW, what an image....

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