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Saddle Burn

Notice when I walk, I swing and sway To send us a message, life has a way To let us know Life's a rodeo Has left us with a saddle burn as we start to decay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/30/2017 8:25:00 PM
I rode my we horse in the sun. Later spotted a polka dot nun! Perhaps I was delirious, no one would take me serious. My ass was chapped equally on each bun.. Enjoyable read Jack, I thought I'd join in the fun.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/30/2017 8:44:00 PM
Welcome to the Limerick Club!!! You did good, my friend!!! :)
Date: 4/29/2017 2:25:00 PM
You say life's like riding a bull?//Plenty of push, tug and pull?//Some might scoff//but I got bucked off//before my satchel was full. (?) Hey, it rhymes! BURN ON JACKSON!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/30/2017 7:53:00 AM
Yes... er... it rhymes!!! LOL Your lims are top notch though! You have overtaken yours truly as PS Limerick King! LIM ON!!!!

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