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This was inspired from facts I read about government bodies all over the world Justice only serves on one side of society a fact in honest down to earth truth

No one lives in a democracy opening word lie Let's be frank for a moment we are all slaves unto a taxpaying system none the less true Graded by our salary in class distinction fact poor lawless order is the ruling bodies ignorance that takes under the table deals which turn tricks Hidden from view by corruption shady characters our role models to carry into the future light Power generates a hungry source unyielding That lusts with the endless need for more constantly envying others happiness chaos will follow unmoral government bodies They who should be prosecuted where justice dwells under high treason against the state and her children I believe in truth and honestly not falsehoods

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Gerald Dillenbeck

Date: 11/22/2016 2:41:00 PM

And you live in Ireland! What must you think of us on the other side of the Atlantic? Appreciate your political verse; not too many of us using that option. Gerald Oliver

Sunshine Smile

Date: 11/14/2016 6:12:00 AM

- The biggest lie is the truth being suppressed - Politics and clownery a straightforward comparison - One meaningful poem, great written, Liam - Best wishes for a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/12/2016 6:32:00 PM

Hello Liam Mate!! A most compelling and powerful political verse here my great friend. Your words say it all, and speak a definite truth to power!! Outstanding!! A TR/FAV too!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/11/2016 3:42:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Yes,very sadly the world we live in these days is completely in chaos, Liam.All the very sad, terrible events, injustices everywhere, make my heart n' soul very sad everyday.Prayers are very powerful, we need pray more for all Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!I wish you n' your very dear family all the best always.To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/11/2016 3:08:00 PM

Good one!

Christy Stover

Date: 11/11/2016 3:07:00 PM

This is an excellent poem. I love poetry that makes a true statement and causes one to stop and think.