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Sad Song Boy

Oh please sing, my sad song boy Make me cry for roses fading Touch my mood with verse of pain In your pool of sadness wading Let me bathe, to grieve in vain Sing to me, my sad song boy Spin your song in which I’ll wallow Winding blue ceramic notes Tend your tune so I may follow Agony, on which it dotes 6/26/18

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Date: 7/2/2018 12:24:00 PM
Sad, but touches the heartstrings lightly. Somehow, there remains the impression of hope. Nice write! ~ gw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/2/2018 1:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon !!
Date: 6/27/2018 9:34:00 AM
I'll bet many have heard his sad song. Your lines capture it perfectly, Mike Well done!!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/27/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Warren!!
Date: 6/27/2018 9:19:00 AM
Love all the lines in this short write Mike and all the references to music. Touch my mood with verse of pain ... LOVE that!!!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/27/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Judy. He is actually a small ceramic music box xxoo
Date: 6/26/2018 5:43:00 PM
Beautiful in it's sadness, Mike. Very well penned!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/26/2018 7:52:00 PM
Thanks so much Daniel!!
Date: 6/26/2018 3:59:00 PM
I love me good sad poem. Life is full of moments like that. Great write. You portrayed your feelings well.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/26/2018 5:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Eileen, I really appreciate your comments xxoo
Date: 6/26/2018 3:45:00 PM
A melancholy song, Mike..the two ending lines sum it up so well.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/26/2018 3:55:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay !!
Date: 6/26/2018 3:20:00 PM
ohh, how pensive and beautiful is this melody, mike... huggs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/26/2018 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette xxoo
Date: 6/26/2018 3:13:00 PM
I love the line, make me cry for roses fading. It really stands out in this one. Well done Mike :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/26/2018 7:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Heidi, I am really glad you liked it xxoo
Date: 6/26/2018 2:09:00 PM
beautiful but such sad lines Mike:-( hugs jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/26/2018 2:15:00 PM
Thanks Jan, xxoo

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