Mike Gentile Poet Rhyme

Sad Song Boy

Oh please sing, my sad song boy

Make me cry for roses fading
Touch my mood with verse of pain
In your pool of sadness wading
Let me bathe, to grieve in vain


Sing to me, my sad song boy

Spin your song in which I’ll wallow
Winding blue ceramic notes
Tend your tune so I may follow
Agony, on which it dotes

6/26/18

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Gershon Wolf July 2, 2018 at 12:24 PM Sad, but touches the heartstrings lightly. Somehow, there remains the impression of hope. Nice write! ~ gw Mike Gentile July 2, 2018 at 1:56 PM Thanks so much, Gershon !!

Warren Doll June 27, 2018 at 9:34 AM I'll bet many have heard his sad song. Your lines capture it perfectly, Mike Well done!! Mike Gentile June 27, 2018 at 9:50 AM Thank you so much, Warren!!

Judith S June 27, 2018 at 9:19 AM Love all the lines in this short write Mike and all the references to music. Touch my mood with verse of pain ... LOVE that!!! Mike Gentile June 27, 2018 at 9:50 AM Thank you so much, Judy. He is actually a small ceramic music box xxoo

Daniel Turner June 26, 2018 at 5:43 PM Beautiful in it's sadness, Mike. Very well penned! Mike Gentile June 26, 2018 at 7:52 PM Thanks so much Daniel!!

Eileen Manassian June 26, 2018 at 3:59 PM I love me good sad poem. Life is full of moments like that. Great write. You portrayed your feelings well. Mike Gentile June 26, 2018 at 5:00 PM Thank you so much Eileen, I really appreciate your comments xxoo

Vijay Pandit June 26, 2018 at 3:45 PM A melancholy song, Mike..the two ending lines sum it up so well. Mike Gentile June 26, 2018 at 3:55 PM Thanks so much, Vijay !!

Nette Onclaud June 26, 2018 at 3:20 PM ohh, how pensive and beautiful is this melody, mike... huggs Mike Gentile June 26, 2018 at 5:01 PM Thank you so much, Nette xxoo

Heidi Sands June 26, 2018 at 3:13 PM I love the line, make me cry for roses fading. It really stands out in this one. Well done Mike :) Mike Gentile June 26, 2018 at 7:54 PM Thanks so much, Heidi, I am really glad you liked it xxoo

Jan Allison June 26, 2018 at 2:09 PM beautiful but such sad lines Mike:-( hugs jan xx Mike Gentile June 26, 2018 at 2:15 PM Thanks Jan, xxoo