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I remember her hair long black and beautiful dark yet with golden light in the length of it. So lovely, liquid and glorious the luxurious smell of her hair scented with springtime jasmine and magnolia. It has been weeks now renewed visions of pleasure what I write is true I knew the sweet splendor of love. Calm as a second summer tonight I see a star why is it now that i see just now. I write for her this poem that begins with I love you and ends with I love you somewhere in the middle is a good by for all the times I hurt her....

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Date: 11/23/2014 7:59:00 PM
Your line "Calm as a second summer" set strings of wonderment vibrating. I'm just sitting here pondering all the meaning that those few words might convey. Wondrous!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/23/2014 8:02:00 PM
Thank you Mark..
Date: 11/17/2014 5:03:00 AM
piercing my heart, ken.. there's always time for renewal.. beautiful!.. huggs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/17/2014 5:43:00 AM
Thanks for visiting Nette!
Date: 11/17/2014 4:55:00 AM
It's a lovely poem, Ken. Regret makes us wake up to the goodness of what we had. Hope all is well.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/17/2014 5:43:00 AM
Thank you Eileen and good to read from you!
Date: 11/16/2014 10:35:00 PM
A sad poem it is , I love you is a start. Ken, good write :) eve
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/16/2014 10:41:00 PM
Thank you Eve!

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