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at a friend’s burial life slipped away as vapor in air if it was nowhere for family and friends he had held sway they would miss his affections and his care they learned to live together and share they had worked hard and with lots of patience overcome harsh struggle with endurance with his sudden departure to heaven they face the biggest test of their essence will his values be sustained or broken? Date: 18.5.2016

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Date: 7/12/2016 1:40:00 AM
Mohan. Nice win. Skat
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Date: 5/21/2016 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine placement
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Date: 5/20/2016 1:36:00 PM
Mohan, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 5/19/2016 8:15:00 AM
Family and friends are very much missed when it's their time to go; some even more than others, especially if they were relied on in life. gl in the contest, Mohan. // paul
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Date: 5/18/2016 2:25:00 PM
mohan it is so difficult to lose a friend, best of luck in the contest, 7 ~
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