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''sad Dizain''


Oh, she is quite frail now and very old,
     When she walks you can tell she is in pain;
Loves a nap in the sun and hates the cold,
               Beautiful, I whisper- my tears like rain.
Oh, please time stop clicking, I scream in vain,
     All she gives is unconditional love,
Its hard to think of her dwelling above;
               She is an old cat and is my best friend,
Oh, her death-  sorrow hard to let go of.
         I held her to my heart until the end . . . .

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May 15, 2016


Poetry/Dizain/"Sad Dizain"
Copyright Protected, ID 16-790-683-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Sad Poem-Dizain
sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Very sad, but beautifully expressed dizain, BW. I agree w/Richard ... it's so hard to let go of a loved one. Such a tenderly written poem. Loved it though. Love and peace to you.
A  Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 1:44 AM
Good looking poem .....skat
Fiery Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 1:03 AM
excellent write my friend..!!! Congratulations too..:)))~Red
Lamoureux Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 5:50 AM
It is hard to let go of and old friend. Congrats Constance.
Daniel Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 2:38 AM
Congratulations Constance on your top spot:) A beautiful sad write:)
Misra Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 12:27 AM
Congrats, Broken, on a very sweet and sad poem well deserving the win. ~karam~
Gazbowski Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Hauntingly beautiful. Congrats on your win.
Williams Gault Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 7:08 PM
My goodness, that sorrowful pain of losing such a constant friend. Quite touching, congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Love of your ailing pet. Beautiful! Congratulations!
Chansarkar Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Love for pets can be heartbreaking, congratulations BW!
Haight Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Oh, dear...this did bring a tear to my eyes, Broken Wings. So sad, but so wonderfully written. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
Ficklin Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 3:09 PM
I know the sadness.... congrats on your placement.
Davey Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Awww how special! I love my animals and I know those feelings! Congrats on your top spot with this precious poem
Devnath  Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Beautifully drawn a poem with beautiful picture. A great congrats on your win. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
Scars Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Broken Wings, a beautiful poem..sad yet beautiful...congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 3:09 PM
I LOVE this one, Constance. You really captured the essence of this challenge. I know exactly this feeling, which I had for my dear Callie Cat.
Smith Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:04 AM
It is so tough to see a pet and a love one grow old. Relive the happy times.
La France Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:07 AM
Tim, yes there were 18 years of unconditional love but that last day shattered me, thanks for visiting
Kendrick Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Emotive and expressive work..It is sad to loose a pet..Sara
La France Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Sara, thanks so much for visiting ~
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 12:37 PM
- Really painful, B.W. - Luck in contest (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Anne-Lise thanks for the compassion and the 7 ~
Mcconnell Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Well penned Constance, although sad it tells the emotions well, good stuff, blessings, Gordon
La France Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 9:30 AM
Gordon, thanks for visiting and for the nice comment ...
Stebbings Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 6:05 AM
Beautiful, Broken Wings, been there myself. Best wishes for the competition.
La France Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 9:32 AM
barry thanks for visiting, all pet owners know this pain
Lariviere Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 11:39 PM
très triste très bon
La France Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Etienne, thanks so much for visiting
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