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Sacred Time

Bursting through the trees
The Daystar's ephemeral
Casting long shadows

naturehaiku

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

November 27, 2009 at 11:48 AM

Congratulations Terry, on your success in Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” poetry contest with this lovely haiku. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brandee Augustus

November 26, 2009 at 11:37 AM

You really painted a nice picture with the words that you chose. Congratulations on getting a win in this contest.

Audrey Haick

November 25, 2009 at 7:15 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Ascension" Contest! Peace and love, Audrey

James Fraser

November 25, 2009 at 10:22 AM

Excellent Haiku Terry, big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James

November 24, 2009 at 3:08 PM

What a creative view. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Elaine George

November 24, 2009 at 4:15 AM

BEAUTIFUL HAIKU, TERRY. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN RAUL'S CONTEST. LAINIE

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 24, 2009 at 3:40 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Terry. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 23, 2009 at 9:54 PM

Congrats, Terry, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved winner ... beautiful haiku... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"