Sacred Space

I had no interest in anything
and let others seize control
I left home with only a suitcase is the scary thing
and sought refuge with friends who accepted that role

I wasn't a gold mine digger
but I was digging for gold
not looking for something bigger
though it found me when I was cold

Lately I've improved
I've been decorating some rooms
I made a friend without nervousness I proved
twas a relief to be without costumes

I can feel myself concentrating
as I'm writing this down
It feels right not to be as foggy as I concentrate here
maybe I'll be able to smile not frown

I may have spoke too soon
but it's my duty to replace
the things I now consider precious in tune
with my dreams of sacred space

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/11/2021 5:01:00 PM
Hi! Been venturing for decades and I just love it. Always discovered fab people and new adventures. Go for it Pangie.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 2/20/2021 4:27:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/11/2021 5:05:00 PM
Keep growing, always. Don't ever be a know it all. Boy...they are the worst I'D RATHER BE GREEN AMD GROwing THAN RIGHT AND ROTTEN. One of my fav quotes
Date: 1/24/2021 7:02:00 PM
Love this interwoven poem, you bring to us, Angela
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/26/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thank you, harry :)
Date: 1/23/2021 3:58:00 AM
Friends can sometimes be more like family. Moving into the unknown with just a suitcase was brave, but I can sense from your poems you are a very strong woman. Well penned. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/26/2021 1:09:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. I appreciate it :)
Date: 1/22/2021 8:21:00 PM
Hello Angela … it does come to a stage when one gets a crazy mixed up feeling without knowing what’s ahead, but given time finding that sacred space can be achieved - thank you Angela - Lindsay
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/26/2021 1:08:00 PM
Thank you, Lindsay. I appreciate you reading and commenting :)
Date: 1/22/2021 5:02:00 PM
I can relate to this when I left my tiny island in the South Pacific to NY. Such move I still can’t believe I did it. Some scary moments I look back and amaze how I am still here... I’m glad you’re doing ok though... hugs
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/22/2021 7:05:00 PM
Sometimes venturing into the unknown can be scary but I believe in the end it teaches us things that we would have been oblivious to if we hadn't chose that path. Thank you, Akkina for reading and commenting. Hugs back :)
Date: 1/22/2021 2:05:00 PM
I like the positive turn towards the middle of the poem, Angela. You describe someone who was lost but now has found the way--not uncommon occurrence.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/22/2021 2:17:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay :)
Date: 1/22/2021 8:55:00 AM
I thought you had gone for ever. Thank you for reading so many of my poem. However reading your poem give concern. You seem so sad. I prefer to see you happy. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/22/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. This is partly fiction. I am happy. I had to take a break for awhile from writing. Hope you have a great weekend :)
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