Seren Roberts Poet Dodoitsu

Sacred Place For Natural Dodoitsu Contest

If you gaze on my beauty
from my snow white head to the
lakes  at my feet you find peace
deep within your soul

I am a sacred place, one
of three mountains in Japan
wealth* is what my name translates
Mount Fuji thats me


*Present kanji for the word Fuji is wealth or abundant



Penned by: Seren Roberts

Dated: December 17  2012

Contest name:  Natural Dodoitsu. Contest

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Skat A February 7, 2013 at 2:14 PM A nice winning poem~LUV*SKAT Seren Roberts February 7, 2013 at 11:42 PM Thanks Skat ......Seren

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2013 at 9:40 PM oh, I learned something new today. that it translates as wealth!! Nicely done, seren. Congrats on the winners list.

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2013 at 10:05 PM SEREN, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD Seren Roberts January 11, 2013 at 10:06 PM Thank you ....Seren

Kash Poet January 9, 2013 at 11:34 PM Very nice approach here by you Seren.Congrats on your win! Seren Roberts January 10, 2013 at 3:40 AM Why thank you Kash. Glad you like it.....Seren

Audrey Haick January 9, 2013 at 2:52 PM Congratulations on your fantastic in, Seren. Always, Annalise Seren Roberts January 9, 2013 at 10:35 PM Thank you Annalise ....Seren

Mehnaz Veetil January 9, 2013 at 1:59 PM Cool one... And congratulations .... Seren Roberts January 9, 2013 at 2:42 PM Thank you Mehnaz...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 9, 2013 at 1:23 PM Congratulations on your winning spot Seren , happy to share another spot with you xx Seren Roberts January 9, 2013 at 2:43 PM lol Mandy thats what friends do....Seren

Rollo West December 17, 2012 at 11:19 AM Hello Seren, what a great write my friend, really enjoyed it. Rollo Seren Roberts December 17, 2012 at 6:19 PM Thank you Rollo for your kind comment....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 17, 2012 at 10:24 AM Hi like your doditsu my friend. David can teach you more about form than me my little Welsh leek. He is still teaching me things lol xx Seren Roberts December 17, 2012 at 10:28 AM yummm i like leeks especially with broccoli and a lemon sauce . Thanks Mandy, for your comment. Right, poor David will have me nagging him now. ...Seren

David Williams December 17, 2012 at 5:00 AM Seren woohoo just great I love it...David David Williams December 17, 2012 at 11:42 AM ah now I see... Seren Roberts December 17, 2012 at 6:25 AM Wow thanks David, I will wait for Mandy to see if i followed the form correctly she is my sniffer dog rofl.