Sacred Memory

One dark, blustery night with storm clouds thickening
I peeked out of my window, but couldn’t see a thing
My hands cupped as blinders, and squinting very hard
A brilliant flash of lightening lit up a dark graveyard

The sky became a lightening show and thunder it did roll
Displaying in that graveyard a massive totem pole
It boasted such a dignity and stood there as a guard
Crested with an eagle that watched the whole graveyard

Storm clouds threaten to explode with tears of lament
For all buried in that graveyard is to someone heaven sent
Dad got back into the car as the angels began to cry
We drove from that graveyard under the eagle’s watchful eye

Each night before I sleep, lying in my bed
With exciting sights of the day dancing in my head
The memory I recall the most, the one I can’t discard
Is a flat tire on a stormy night,  totem pole and graveyard


Randy Steele

August 13, 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
August 24, 2011 at 9:29 AM
A great spooky story with images to delight the mind. I enjoyed reading!
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Roberts' "Totems in the Darkening Sky" contest Randy. Love, Carol
Ramsdale Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Congratulations on your win! Great job... Caryl Ramsdale
Gorelick Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 10:18 AM
What an experience for a young man..congrats on your win!BG
Williams Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 3:47 AM
hey Randy, congrats on your win David
Johnson Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 1:53 AM
Vividly exciting poem. Congratulations Randy. Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:57 PM
Congrats Randy on your seventh place win in Totem contest.. with this grand write luv..
Roberts Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 10:26 PM
congrats on your 7th place win in the contest Randy with this spooky tale
Mehta Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 5:56 PM
Lovely penned write with mystery and awe, Randy
Henderson Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 12:28 PM
Love this poem Randy,your experience of that night will stay with you forever.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 12:08 PM
an excellent creative tale Randy ..mysterious nd eerie ..your last verse draws this piece altogether..luv.. good luck in the contest..
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August 13, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Very well written my friend,....enjoyed Michael
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