John Freeman Poet Senryu

"sacred Heart and Soul"

“Sacred Heart and Soul”

My garden my spouse,
speaks heart wisdom's sweet honey,
to my soul, her spouse.

Note: Our Sacred Heart  is the female Spouse,
While our Soul is the male spouse.

For the Senryu contest
In honor of: Sweetheart of PoetrySoup
Placed #2

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James Fraser August 2, 2010 at 7:17 AM Lovely Senyru John, you have such love and emotion within you >> James

Lynette Chachere August 1, 2010 at 12:06 AM a lovely poem about this wonderful garden, it couldn't be any more sweeter.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2010 at 6:56 PM very nice, john.Way to go!!

James Peranteau July 28, 2010 at 7:24 AM What a confident poem John, it speaks volumes ! Awesome write Sir ! james

Dr.Ram Mehta July 27, 2010 at 4:46 PM Congrats on the second place win, John

Sara Kendrick July 27, 2010 at 4:02 PM Good luck in the contest with this great write that should be in the winners' circle..Sara

Timothy Brumley July 27, 2010 at 2:37 PM Congrats John, way to go! I like your take here, it's very interesting.

Joyce Johnson July 27, 2010 at 1:27 PM Congratulations John. This is lovely and a winner. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2010 at 11:51 AM Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie Bariana's contest "Soul Speaks". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts July 27, 2010 at 11:45 AM gorgeous write, congrats on your win today, luv Francine

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 27, 2010 at 11:42 AM Congrats Moses on your second place in my Soul Speaks contest.. wonderful words... thankxxx for supporting my contest endeavors.. with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2010 at 7:44 AM I enjoyed reading your newest poem today John. I see this one in the winner's circle. I want to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse July 27, 2010 at 6:29 AM enjoyed reading your works today! Great write!

Wilma Neels July 27, 2010 at 4:51 AM Best wishes for the contest with your Senryu John -- Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta July 27, 2010 at 3:14 AM Nice informative thought, John