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Sacred Beloved In Collaboration With Akkina Downing

Every night I close my eyes,  loneliness suffocates my soul. I rapidly escape through a portal of dreams, where we once met with a passionate embrace.  In your arms I felt alive,  but dreams fade away like stars afraid of dawn. Loneliness returns with its gloomy silence, yet again, I am absorbed in cloudy days. I remain alone, intoxicated in your thoughts,  But I yearn to be found, like an undiscovered treasure. I want to be touched, to be adored. My heart yearns to smile once more, laugh from my soul,  feel alive, dancing on clouds, our stepping stones to heaven. I want just you. I recall, how the mysteries of the universe, bonded our souls to ignite lost flames. Vibrant embers floating from star to star, how stardust glittered in your hair. Naked moon shone through your eyes - as the galaxy admired us drifting nonchalantly. In horizon's black shroud, you were a masterpiece of magnification. Subtle artistry of your touch, seduced silent stars to sigh. But as each star faded away, Jealous sun stole you from me. In my breathless ambiguity, I ponder if you were a hallucination or fantasy - only my lover in distant dreams. Now the beat of my heart is out of tune, in the absence of my sacred beloved. Yet, I still feel you inside me. I curse the necessities of reality, searching for my spiritual lover. Close my eyes, to sleep for eternity - seeking that alternative phenomenon. Where romance and love reside in a never ending story.
Silent One collaboration with Akkina Downing 3 November 2020 Akkina and I wrote this last night. Akkina, is a great poet who has not posted for two years, because she was bullied! I wanted to encourage her to write again and post her wonderful poems. Please encourage her by visiting her page: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?ID=81129 Thank you
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Downing  Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 9:09 PM
Just coming by to read our AWESOME COLLAB cause i miss you on soup... Hope you'll be back very soon :) twinny!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Such a beautiful poem, SO and Akkina. A most romantic collaboration. Ink seduction from beginning to end. Love and more love always.
One Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Thank you..
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 7:01 AM
I'm doing well, SO. Thanks for asking, my quill brother. Love and peace for you forever.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 5:28 AM
Your poetry searches for the perfect love not only to the ends of the earth but in all facets of the universe. A lovely write. Love the line: Vibrant embers floating from star to star, how stardust glittered in your hair.
One Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:12 AM
Thank you..
S     Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 2:27 AM
Full of longing for something that was, and the basic human need to be loved and appreciated. Something we all can relate to. A beautiful result of your collaboration. So sweet of you to encourage others to ink their pens again (including me!). ;-)
One Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:12 AM
Thank you..
Tor Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 9:09 AM
An exceptional piece done by two very talented and creative writers. Enjoyed very much my friend...
One Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 2:09 AM
Thank you..
Edmonds  Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 5:37 PM
Hauntingly beautiful collaboration, a lovely love story... well done both you and Akkina, Belle
One Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 2:09 AM
Thank you..
Daniel Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 1:10 AM
Great collaboration between two great people, SO, I hope Akkina comes back:)
One Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 8:48 AM
Thank you Jo..
Jayasankar Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 11:47 PM
Beautiful collaboration Silent One. Hearty welcome Akkina. God bless you both.. ~ Ani
One Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Thank you Anitha..
Nicole Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 8:17 PM
Such a wonderful collaboration. Easy for me to distinguish the difference between Akkina's words (Someone I have never read before) and those of Silent One. Darkness, with a touch of romance. A tender combination. So nice of you to encourage her, Silent One. ~ Brandy
One Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Thank you Brandy
Buehler Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:43 PM
This poem was so lovely and sad, I got tears in my eyes reading it. It brought to mind how astronomers say we're all part of the cosmos, and we come from the stars. It's a Fave for me.
One Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Evelyn..
Crabtree Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:02 PM
Beautifully written collaboration, Silent One. I think you two should do more of these together. A definite save to read again :)
One Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 8:43 AM
Thank you Angela..
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 1:13 PM
a beautiful duet that melded wonderfully together. I hope Akkina feels like she can be here again without worrying about bullies!! Tell her to do the bully contest!
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Sands Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations to the both of you for this excellent collaboration! Very nice :)
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Thank you Heidi..
Ashley Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Silent One, your seamless collaboration, with my dear friend Kina, is filled with the aching beauty of a heart's longing and lost lost imagery. Your passionate pens unite to spill glorious golden ink across a wanting page. Inspiring poetry! Warmest wishes always... ~Susan P. S. A big fav my friend!
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 1:57 PM
Thank you Susan..
Rose  Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 10:24 AM
You have both done an amazing job putting together an exceptional verse, Congrats to the two of you xo
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 1:57 PM
Thank you Pixie
Downing  Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 6:10 AM
I am truly grateful to have a friend like you Silent One. So thank you for pushing me to come back. And especially for collaborating a beautiful piece with me :)
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:41 AM
Thank you Akkina.. Was a pleasure to collaborate with you and look forward to your posting again.. Never give up your talent..
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 4:49 AM
A beautiful poem you wrote together Silent and Akkina. Kudos to you both for this collaboration. Please continue to write Akkina--you are on my favorite poet list. Thank you Silent for reaching out to her. You are both special.
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:41 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Mcintosh Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 4:31 AM
This is amazing and she is truly a amazing poet as you are dear friend. WOW. I'm so impressed as I usually am with your words. This is a fave of course! Love it. God bless you always :)
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:34 AM
Thank you Gina..
Krutsinger Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 4:31 AM
This is a fantastic collaboration. Wow! Beautifully penned. Wonderful write.
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:34 AM
Thank you Caren..
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 3:03 AM
- A wonderful collaboration from you & Akkina :) - This text in the end is a mirror image of your heart, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:34 AM
Thank you Anne - Lise..
Chircop Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 2:45 AM
Beautiful,Passionate and Romantic poem between you and Akkina.Awesomely penned with so much emotion between the lines.A Fave.
Chircop Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 2:43 AM
Beautiful,Passionate and Romantic poem between you and Akkina.Awesomely penned with so much emotion between the lines.A Fave.
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Charmaine...
Williams Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 2:38 AM
This poem is truly magnificent, and the fact that you both did it in just one night was a true feat. Bravo. A fave for me. I for one was very sad when Kina left. She was a great support to me in the time she was there. It is most upsetting to see a bully win, but I guess if it causes stress, then there might not be another option other than leaving . Great to see you back Kina xox
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Maria, all credit to Kina on this one..
Buhagiar Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 2:25 AM
One can only expect the best from Silent One and happy to say the collaboration with Akkina was just as good. Pity is she allowed the bully to win the contest. For she should never have stopped. A great collaboration. ~~
One Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Victor..
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