Sacrament City

Not long ago
Say, about 300 years
Two Indigenous tribes
Nearly disappeared
 
Others came
From year to year
Hunters, trappers
And future peers
 
John Sutter
A Swiss guy
This city became
The place to try
 
At Sutters Mill
Gold was found
In Coloma
Now ghostly grounds
 
But this place of new
With its foundations down
Pre 1849
It was just a town
 
February 27th
1850
This town now
Became a city
 
In its gorgeous valleys
With 2000 fruit tree's
It's agriculture was born
A taste to please
 
To the modern world
You should see it now
High rise buildings
A place so proud
 
As we all remember
From it's infant years
Like every other named city
Shared strife and tears
 
The past has been
As our future tells
But a certain few
Have to be remembered as well
 
What these tribes left 
So little to show
But a city grew
Called Sacramento


" For Barbara Gorelick "

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/6/2009 10:35:00 AM
Love the history throughtout James! Intriguing to say the least, you always know how to keep the ink flowing creativiely!
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Date: 7/5/2009 2:55:00 PM
Brabara will love this, James, as did I! The description of the history was so intriguing and I kept wondering exactly where it was as I was reading. Sacramento is a beautiful place and you described its past brilliantly. Outstanding poem! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 7/5/2009 1:43:00 PM
Great historical piece! You are a great writer.
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Date: 7/5/2009 12:54:00 PM
James, your sweetheart! You couldnt have written anything I would have enjoyed more. My son played the role of James Marshall who actually discovered gold at SuttersFort. its a wonderful spot and we got to spend the night at the fort. Nice except for the wail of ambulances from the hospital next door. sheesh. thank you so much, I love it and it will go in may personal favorites. BG
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Date: 7/5/2009 12:16:00 PM
Sacramento! Thanks for the America History lesson, James. Hey!!! I was born on Sacramento's birthday! Thank you for your comment on my poem, James.
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Date: 7/5/2009 9:24:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL,JUST BEAUTIFUL---CHARMA
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Date: 7/5/2009 8:38:00 AM
gorgeous tribute for Barbara! James!
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