Sabbatical Dreams - It
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This is a very intriguing contest format. Using four lines of another's poem and weaving them into a "new" collaboration. The "bolded" lines are the four from the sponsor's poem. I leaned a little bit to the dark side in my interpretation.
The label I hid on the wine bottle
said cheap, boozy, available, needy
it was easily seen in reddened eyes
They told me of the psycho cats demise
eerie boardwalk creaks near the white sand beach
laying flowers on her vintage guitar
Pouring the last of the wine in the sand
had she succumbed to the dark allure of
sabbatical dreams after quarantine
10/7/2020
Collaborate With Me Poetry Contest
sponsor - Kim Rodrigues
Copyright © John Lawless | Year Posted 2020
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