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This is a very intriguing contest format.  Using four lines of another's poem and weaving them into a "new" collaboration.  The "bolded" lines are the four from the sponsor's poem.  I leaned a little bit to the dark side in my interpretation. 

The label I hid on the wine bottle said cheap, boozy, available, needy it was easily seen in reddened eyes They told me of the psycho cats demise eerie boardwalk creaks near the white sand beach laying flowers on her vintage guitar Pouring the last of the wine in the sand had she succumbed to the dark allure of sabbatical dreams after quarantine 10/7/2020 Collaborate With Me Poetry Contest sponsor - Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 11/10/2020 2:13:00 AM
Congratulations John on your top win!!
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Date: 11/9/2020 8:58:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Blessing/
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Date: 11/9/2020 8:48:00 PM
Never underestimate the power of the dark side... great job on the collab with those evocative lines. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 11/9/2020 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your Win. What a crazy cat. Enjoy your win and day............
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Date: 11/9/2020 7:36:00 AM
Great work John. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/9/2020 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations, John, on your Top Win, for this well-defined and well-deserving piece!!
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Date: 11/9/2020 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations John, the collaboration so deserved first place... Belle
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Date: 11/8/2020 9:19:00 PM
John, this is so clever and skillfully done. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/8/2020 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations, John! Fun collaborating with you!
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John lawless
Date: 11/9/2020 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Kim, it was a very intriguing contest. The muse mumbled a long "hmmmmm" upon first reading the theme.