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SABBATH DAY RABBIT EATING Dandelion Greens-

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on the Sabbath day my yard was unruly un- cut grass stood before me a rabbit sits going on his ears and mustache he starts chewing eat- ing dandelion leaves also yummy was this to him little gray white rabbit eating the green dandelion leaf on the Sabbath day
6/2/2024 Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2024©

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Date: 6/2/2024 7:51:00 PM
I've never seen haiku presented this way. Very unique. And impressive.
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Date: 6/2/2024 6:45:00 PM
Watching nature is one way to spend the Sabbath! Have a great day.
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