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Tiny pirates Have capsized my bed And stolen my sleep Blast those little Buccaneers! Now I'm counting sheep! written by Deb Wilson The motif is philisophical

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2014 12:49:00 AM

this is exactly what I pictured for this kind of contest, an actual short poem that is so cute to read!! Congrats. I just love this.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2014 12:18:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Deb. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 2/28/2014 11:37:00 AM

impressive poem Deb......SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2014 8:42:00 AM

Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, deb

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/28/2014 8:32:00 AM

Congrats Deb on the win . A brilliant one indeed.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/31/2011 4:33:00 AM

Congrats on S.O.S. being featured, Deb.

Tammy Armstrong

Date: 12/30/2011 8:07:00 PM

Cute!

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/30/2011 12:28:00 PM

An amusing little poem to be proud of very much. It was good enough to be featured this week. I agree with them.

Kaunda Salimu

Date: 12/30/2011 7:52:00 AM

What a deep six line poem. Wow.... Me love it big time...

Joseph Burchett

Date: 12/27/2011 7:13:00 PM

Love it !

Daver Austin

Date: 12/27/2011 3:06:00 PM

Look out! Here comes Peter Pan and Tinkerbell. This is choice, Deb. I'm crazy about short, poems of complete imagination. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/27/2011 7:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Deb. I wish you the best on your writing endeavors in the new year. Love, Carol

Amy Green

Date: 3/20/2010 7:06:00 PM

LOL!!! Love it!