S O S

Tiny pirates
Have capsized my bed
And stolen my sleep
Blast those little
Buccaneers!
Now I'm counting sheep!



written by Deb Wilson
The motif is philisophical

funnysleepenclosed rhyme

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Andrea Dietrich

March 1, 2014 at 12:49 AM

this is exactly what I pictured for this kind of contest, an actual short poem that is so cute to read!! Congrats. I just love this.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 28, 2014 at 12:18 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Deb. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

February 28, 2014 at 11:37 AM

impressive poem Deb......SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 28, 2014 at 8:42 AM

Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, deb

Kayod5 Kayode

February 28, 2014 at 8:32 AM

Congrats Deb on the win . A brilliant one indeed.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

December 31, 2011 at 4:33 AM

Congrats on S.O.S. being featured, Deb.

Tammy Armstrong

December 30, 2011 at 8:07 PM

Cute!

Robert Pettit

December 30, 2011 at 12:28 PM

An amusing little poem to be proud of very much. It was good enough to be featured this week. I agree with them.

Kaunda Salimu

December 30, 2011 at 7:52 AM

What a deep six line poem. Wow.... Me love it big time...

Joseph Burchett

December 27, 2011 at 7:13 PM

Love it !

Daver Austin

December 27, 2011 at 3:06 PM

Look out! Here comes Peter Pan and Tinkerbell. This is choice, Deb. I'm crazy about short, poems of complete imagination. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver