S Is For Spacey

S is for SPACEY 

just feeling kinda spacey
in an outfit kinda lacey
as I watch the sleeping cat
the sunbeams growing fat
it’s not that I don’t care
just a dust dream in the air
floating through the sunny rays
in a spacey, lacey haze
but I’ll be back as soon
as the sun-rays leave the room
to remove this lacy hat
to wake that sleeping cat.


John G. Lawless
9/15/2015

submitted to – E is for Emotion – Poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Canerdy Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 8:14 PM
A 7 for sure! I like the lighthearted, whimsical tone and wording of the poem. Janice
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 1:07 AM
ahhh this is so darn CUTE, John!!! I love it.
Gorelick Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Sweet as can be...BG
Gulley Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 11:15 AM
A lovely little cheery write John. I enjoyed this write a lot. Big Smile : ).....Sharon
Lawless Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Sharon. It is always nice to hear from a new voice.
Raha Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 10:31 AM
Beautifully worded,loved the light hearted feel.good luck in the contest.
Lawless Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Thanks Miraj for stopping by to comment.
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