S Is For Sadness - For Contest

Sadness – a black cloud that sat on my head
when my mummy told me that my rabbit was dead
a hurt in my heart when my friends called me names
and refused to allow me to join in their games

A croak in my voice when I try to explain
but the words just won’t come – and I’m crying again
and I really don’t know what my face is about  
look - my brow is all wrinkly, my bottom lip’s out

What on earth is this thing that is happening to me
this is scary, I want to be happy for me
if only my arms were a hundred feet long
I could hug myself better and sing me a song

But wait; if there’s happy, there has to be sad
and if there is good, then there has to be bad
we have up, we have down, there is darkness and light,
and the opposite feeling of peace is a fight

So I guess that there must be more people than me
who are feeling sad too and they don’t want to be
if only I knew how to make them feel calm
would it work - a big hug from my hundred foot arm

Now I know, it’s a feeling, it’s inside of me
like the one when my rabbit jumped up on my knee
he’d been chased by a horrible dog in the street
as I cuddled him close, I could feel his heartbeat

And my tears dripped down as his breathing grew still
and the heat from his body grew colder until
all the sadness that I felt would just never end  
turned to joy with the memories of my dearest friend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 28, 2015 at 10:07 PM
Bill, Congratulations --Forever **SKAT**
Cheema Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 3:53 PM
A big hug from a hundred foot arm gives such a warm feeling for saddened souls. Congrats Bill! The winning Rm enveloped you! Balveen
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Ahh!! Great quality work!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 11:04 PM
Wonderful expressions Bill! Congrats on big win!
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 3:48 PM
Bill, I just love how you did your poem. A very well deserved winner.Congratulations.
Lindsay Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 3:52 PM
My 12yo granddaughter recently lost her pet and I watched how she reacted to it, which helped me to get into the mindset. Thanks again, Andrea. ;)
Roper Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 11:04 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Nance Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Great contest entry! Grats on your win!
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 4:09 PM
This is superb for the contest Bill Good luck:-) hugs jan xx
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